This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story of mice. It can feature any variety of the little critters in any situation. Are the the character or the inciting incident? Use any genre, including BOTS (based on a true story). Go where the prompt leads!
I can’t think about mice without thinking of Rose Fyleman’s poem in which she states, ‘I think mice are rather nice.’
It’s a poem I’m sure nearly everyone must have learned sometime at school.
While I’m more included to agree with the people Rose says ‘don’t seem to like them much’, they figure in many stories for children and are usually portrayed as cute and adorable.
Even Hush in Possum Magic, one of my favourite Mem Fox picture books, started her journey as a mouse before being editorially transformed into a very cute and very adorable invisible possum.
The three blind mice with their severed tails may not be quite so cute, but really mice are everywhere, as Pussycat confirmed in his report on visiting the Queen.
A familiar tale is that of the pet dog eating the homework. But what if it wasn’t the dog, it was mice instead? Would that be more believable? That’s where I’ve gone in response to Charli’s prompt. I hope you like it.
The Mice Ate My Homework
“What happened to your homework this time?”
“It was mice, Miss.”
“I thought you got rid of the mice.”
“We did. In the house. But I left my bag in the car last night.”
“Hmm?”
“The car was in the shed.”
“Should’ve been safe there.”
“It would, except —”
“Except?”
“Tommy forgot to let Rusty out.”
“So?”
“Rusty usually chases the mice away.”
“And?”
“Dad accidentally left the window down. The mice got in and —”
“They ate your homework?”
“They thought it was tasty, Miss.”
“That’s not a smear of peanut butter there, is it?”
“Definitely not, Miss!”
Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.
This was a delightful flash fiction on mice! Oh, the peanut butter.
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Thank you, Jennie. The peanut butter is a bit of a give-away, isn’t it?
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Yes, and wonderful!
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🙂
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What an excellent excuse for not having done your homework, Norah. If only I thought about this when I was at school.
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I’m sure you came up with something equally, or more, imaginative, Hugh. 😊
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mice love peanut butter…
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So I’ve heard. 🙂
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A fun flash Norah. Sure the mice at the homework, lol 🙂
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True, Debby. Definitely true. 🤣
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It makes sense, Norah. Some of the paper and books in a box got chewed up and I only saw some droppings afterwards! Nice flash!
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Thanks, Miriam. Mice will eat anything. Particularly if it’s plastered with peanut butter and put in front of them. 😂
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Haha, this is wonderfully written Norah, with some rhymes thrown in there too. The story is excellent and fun. Thank you for the cheer! 🙂
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I’m pleased you enjoyed it and hope that no one ever tells you that as an excuse. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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That is darling, Norah.
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Thank you, Jacqui.
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Geat take on the prompt, Norah.
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Thanks, Anne. (They ate my idea for another story too. 😂)
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I’ve never heard of Rose’s poem and I have to side with her ‘mice are nice’! I’ve lived thru a major mouse plague in the outback where thousands of them crawled fearlessly all over us, ate through any container to get food … it was most annoying but I still love em 🙂
Love your homework excuse, guess you teachers have heard every excuse under the sun …
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You do well to still love them after living through a plague. They can do a lot of damage. They are quite cute though, that’s for sure.
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they did a lot of damage but they were clearly starving so who could blame them …
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I guess that’s true, compassionate you.
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Yes! Mice eating homework is more believable! Now I’m wondering if the peanut butter was intentional…hmm.
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It was! I wasn’t sure how to make that more clear. 🙂
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Very clever, Norah! 😊
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Thanks, Pete. 🙂
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