This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to in 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a gnome. It can be a garden gnome, a Christmas Joulutonttu, or a sauna protector. You can write magical realism, or feature contemporary gnome-like product. Go where the prompt leads!
In my story, I have combined three themes: Christmas wishes, growth mindset and self-acceptance. I hope you like it.
Just Right
Longing for height, Gnomie joined Santa’s queue in the mall. Unfortunately, the queue hardly moved, and people grumbled when the air became hot and still. Elves demanded everyone disperse. Gnomie didn’t want to disperse. He wanted to be tall. Elves spotted him approaching Santa. “Hey! You there!” He froze. Santa glared, then said, “He looks about right.” The elves quickly explained — in the heat, Santa’s ring had slipped off and into the air conditioner, jamming the controls. No one could reach it. “I can!” said Gnomie, and he did. Elves cheered; Santa smiled, and Gnomie contemplated a new request.
Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.
🙂 My husband says short people live longer, too!
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I wonder if that’s true. 🙂
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Lovely flash❤ self esteem is so important in children and our lives!
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Thank you, Luccia. It is indeed. 🙂
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May we all find out how just right we are, as we are.
Yes there is always a little room for improvement, a joke and to share a smile.
And this story made me smile.!
Best to you and yours, and thank you for the animated card.
One year I was visiting a place that had peacocks and there was an albino pair! And the albino peacock strutted his stuff! Just beautiful!
Hugs, Jules
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Thank you for your lovely comment and wishes, Jules. I’m pleased the story gave you a smile. The peacocks sound beautiful.
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A delightful story, Norah!
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Thank you, Jennie. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Norah. 🙂
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How sweet, Norah. I love your little gnome. ❤
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Norah, your Finnish gnome is adorable. I just got my very first Finnish gnome today! He’s cuddly and people are commenting that he looks like the Hub! I wouldn’t have expected to find a gnome from Finland on your shelves. How sweet to know we have cousins.
Good of you to also flag your story’s themes. I think that adds a teaching moment and certainly aligns with your mission. I recognize and applaud the growth mindset.
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It is wonderful to know that our Finnish gnomes are another shared connection, Charli.
I think (hope) my story shows that there is more than one way to have a growth mindset. 🙂
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This is such a sweet story, Norah. Everyone is just right for their role in life.
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This is such a sweet story, Norah. Everyone is just right for their role in life.
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Thank you for your kind words, Robbie, and for your interpretation. 🙂
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That was cute. A great way to ask a favor is to do one!
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Thanks so much, Jacqui. 🙂
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lol what a vivid imagination you are gifted with Norah 🙂
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Thank you, Kate. 🙂
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my pleasure … I like a little fantasy 🙂
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🙂
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wont let me comment on your most recent post … hopefully it will come thru later?!
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I hope it did.
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another wonderful story; but I was thinking – a “growth” mindset may not have rescued that ring… 🙂
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Exactly! I’m pleased you saw that in there. 🙂
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Hello Norah, just popped by to say Happy Christmas and met Gnomie on the way. Great story 🙂 Keep cool, have a wonderful time and see you on the other side xo
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Thank you so much, Pauline. It is always a delight to see you. Apologies for the tardiness in replying. Best wishes to you and yours.
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Oh so clever and fun Norah!! ❤
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Thank you so much, Debby. 🙂
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Nice one, Norah! I hadn’t thought how those poor Australian Santas must suffer in their red jackets and thick white beards.
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That’s right, Anne. It would be good to see them dress more appropriately for our climate.
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Yep, Norah, it’s all there. I had to adjust my set to a hot Christmas time. We got a bit of snow in the night; the kids will be quite distractible today. I am glad Gnomie is starting to accept himself as is.
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Gnomie will be happier now he accepts himself as he is, I’m sure.
Did you have a white Christmas? I can’t imagine how easily distracted the children would be with the snow. It’s bad enough here on windy days.
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No white Christmas where I am in Massachusetts, just an occasional dusting so far. Its been fairly warm.
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Enjoy, whatever the weather. Have a wonderful 2020 from beginning to end.
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