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First Cow in Space #flashfiction

First Cow in Space flash fiction

I’m sure you all know the nursery rhyme Hey Diddle Diddle about a cat playing a fiddle and a cow jumping over the moon.

I love using nursery rhymes with young children. They are a great way for them to learn the sounds and rhythms of our language, develop their memories and just have fun with nonsense. I’ve never considered it important for them (or me) to know the background of the rhymes. We can leave that to more serious students of literature.

The rhythm and rhyme of nursery rhymes encourage children to join in with the recitation and commit them to memory. Their memory for the rhymes can be used as a step into reading. I’ve written before about nursery rhymes, both on this blog and on the readilearn blog here and here. I have also some written some literacy lessons based on nursery rhymes that are available in the readilearn collection, including Let’s read and write with Little Miss Muffet, Humpty Dumpty — a story in five sittings and The Accident — Humpty Dumpty’s Fall.

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about Clarice. She can be any Clarice real, historical, or imagined. What story does she have for you to tell? Go where she may lead!

You may well wonder what that prompt has to do with nursery rhymes. But Charli always says to go where the prompt leads. It usually leads me to children and education in some way. This time, and with a huge apology to all the Clarices out there, it led me to a cow in a nursery rhyme. Why should she be called Clarice? I don’t know, but I thought the first cow in space would be quite an imaginary historical figure. I hope you like my story. I’m certain, if given a chance, children would come up with their own wonderful innovations too.

First Cow in Space

“We are here today with the first cow in space, whose identity, until now, has been kept secret. Will you please welcome [drum roll] Clarice Cloverdale.”

[Applause]

“Clarice, please tell us about your adventure and why your identity was undisclosed for so long.”

“It was simply a non-disclosure agreement. That contract has now terminated so I’m free to tell.”

“Go on.”

“We were all tired of playing second-fiddle to Cat. Dish and Spoon ran away so Dog had no alternative but to make me the star. Needless to say, I was over the moon. The rest is history.”

[Applause]

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Comments

46 responses to “First Cow in Space #flashfiction”

  1. dumbestblogger Avatar

    This makes sense. I’m curious as to what sort of scientific team Clarice had behind her.

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  2. Jennie Avatar

    I love, love this, Norah! Well done. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah. 🙂

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  3. Liz H Avatar

    ❤ ❤ Applause!! ❤ ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you. 🙂

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  4. Book Club Mom Avatar

    Very clever, Norah! Hope you are doing well 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Barbara. Yes, I am doing well, thank you. I hope you are too. 🙂

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  5. Annika Perry Avatar

    Norah, you’re story has brightened my day … a lovely fun piece! 😀

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Annika. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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  6. robinettercleave Avatar

    Love it, Norah!!! Very clever!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robin. 🙂

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  7. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
    Bette A. Stevens

    Cheers! ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Bette. 🙂

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  8. Darlene Avatar

    What a delightful story! I can see it as a picture book.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your encouragement, Darlene. I’ll work on it. 🙂

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  9. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Great job, Norah. That was quite a charming and creative piece. I have to agree that Clarice sounds like the perfect name for a cow.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Pete. I’m pleased you enjoyed my story. 🙂

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  10. Pastor Cathy Avatar

    With the selection of books I was given as a girl, the thought to make use of them has crossed the processing creation I now have called a brain.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That sounds like a good thought, I think. 🙂

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  11. Jim Borden Avatar

    love the creativity, and how you tied it into the things you love!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jim. I enjoyed writing it. 🙂

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  12. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Excellent. Kids will love having a name for that famous cow.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I hope they like my choice. Maybe they’ll think of a name they prefer. 🙂

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  13. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    Haha! What a great piece of flash fiction, Norah. I love how you got all the characters from the nursery rhyme into it. I don’t think I’ve heard about a cow in space in a story, so I think you have an excellent idea for a new children’s book here. And I love the last name you gave Clarice, too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for all your positive comments, Hugh. I’m feeling about as high as Clarice. 🙂

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  14. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    Smart flash, Norah. I’m looking forward to supporting the book launch.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. That would be wonderful 🙂

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  15. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Very cleverly done.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you. 🙂

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  16. calmkate Avatar

    lol love your take on an oldie and the nod to our current history! fun and educational … go Clarice 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Kate. I’m pleased you enjoyed it. I did mix eras, didn’t I? 😂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        and it worked very well, well done!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you. 🙂

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  17. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Such a wonderful imagination you have, Norah. I love this piece.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. You’ve made my day. 🙂

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  18. thecontentedcrafter Avatar

    😀 This made me laugh out loud Norah – so clever! My first thought on seeing the name ‘Clarice’ was from the movie I never saw ‘Silence of the Lambs’. Not nearly as much fun as a moon jumping cow!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased it made you laugh, Pauline. I haven’t watched ‘The Silence of the Lambs’. It definitely wouldn’t make you laugh. I know it would be too scary for me. No where as much fun as a moon jumping cow. 🙂

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      1. thecontentedcrafter Avatar

        Quite so – I don’t think I’ve seen a horror movie since I was 16 and used to sneak off to the midnight movies with my boyfriend and watch those old Vincent Price movies. Then I chewed a hole in his new jersey and he got told off by his mother…… that was the end of me and horror movies 🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Oh my, Pauline. That’s a tale to tell. What a way to end a relationship. 😂😉

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  19. Charli Mills Avatar

    Hey diddle, diddle, I like what you did with the nursey rhyme. Always wanted to know why the cow jumped over the moon. Now I know her name, too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Charli. I had fun writing it. 🙂

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  20. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    [Applause]
    Kind of like a fractured fairy tale. I think Clarice is a great name for a cow, especially such a famous one as this. That was always a favorite nursery rhyme, and I enjoyed this behind the scenes tell-all take.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, D. When I thought of Clarice, all I could think of was a cow. As I said, apologies to all the Clarices out there. But then, I’ve always liked cows. They have beautiful eyes and are such lovely creatures.
      I’m pleased you enjoyed my story.

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      1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

        You are so right about cows. I’m right there with you.

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