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Message from a Feather #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story as a message from a feather. Think about how the message is shared and from whom to whom. What kind of feather? How can you expand where feathers come from like boas and down ski jackets? Whatever tickles your muse this week. Go where the prompt leads!

A Black Feather

There was nothing unusual about the morning as Sarah scoured the beach for treasures. Nothing unusual until …

The feather. Iridescent black, shimmering blue and purple, it sparkled in the sunshine. It stood upright. Like a flag. Like it had been placed there. On purpose. But Sarah and her aunt were alone on the island. Not another soul for over five years. No other footprints. Sarah frowned. And what was the feather from? They’d only ever seen white birds. Was it a sign?

“Aunt Sophie!” she called as she ran. Then, from nowhere, an enormous black bird swooped …

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Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Complaint Received, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.

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31 responses to “Message from a Feather #99WordStories”

  1. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Fantastic story! I’d love to read the sequel to find out what happens.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Nicole. I’d like to write it for you. 😉🤔

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  2. Jules Avatar

    Oh… Maybe it was a large crow from a rescue ship?
    I’ll go towards the positive side 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      You and I both like the happy endings. 🙂

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  3. calmkate Avatar

    lol shades of Hitchcock, more please 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Ooh, Hitchcock. That’s fine praise. Thank you. I’ll see how I go. It’s not really my genre. 🙂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        ah you never know until you try 🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Very true.

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  4. dgkaye Avatar

    Well done! And you left us hanging, lol ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Debby. That was the cliff hanger at the end of the chapter. 😉😅

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      1. dgkaye Avatar

        🙂 🙂

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  5. petespringerauthor Avatar
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    Well done, Norah. I see it crystal clear in my mind. We have all these obnoxious-sounding crows by our house. When I mowed the lawn yesterday, I noticed many of those black feathers.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I wonder why there were so many crow feathers, Pete. We have a lot of crows around here, and a lot of other birds with prettier songs too. I love lying in bed listening to the birds in the morning, and then when I’m up throughout the day. How joyful they sound.

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  6. Jennie Avatar

    Oooo, this was good, Norah. I’m hoping for a Part 2.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your encouragement, Jennie. I can’t guarantee a part 2. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        I can always hope…🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          That’s so sweet. Thank you.

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  7. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Was thinking the same as Anne… Cliffhanger! 🪶 Nice one.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah. 🙂

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  8. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Ooh I love the mystery of life, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jacqui. 🙂

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  9. Anne Goodwin Avatar

    Ooh, cliffhanger. Next instalment next week?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks for your enthusiasm, Anne. We’ll see about another instalment.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you.

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      1. Reaseaorg Avatar

        Very welcome 🙂

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  10. Darlene Avatar

    Wow! A surprise ending.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased it surprised you, Darlene.

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  11. singlikewildflowers Avatar

    Lovely choice of words and mysterious!!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Esther. I’m pleased you think so.

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