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Balloons on the Bumper #99WordStories

Balloons on the Bumper

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about balloons on a bumper. Is it a spectacle, an occasion, an eccentricity? Why are the balloons there? Who is involved? Go where the prompt leads!

The prompt reminded me of an occasion just over twenty years ago, when my sister, niece and I attended a ‘hen’s party’ (terrible term) for my future sister in-law. My niece collected a bunch of helium-filled balloons to take home. She couldn’t squeeze them all into the car, and I drove home with one balloon sailing above us and my sister and niece both in hysterics all the way. Needless to say, they’d both had a few drinks to help the merriment. When we got home, my daughter and nephew, both early teens, decided to inhale the helium, and the hilarity began all over again.

Anyway, I decided to revisit Amy and Lucy and their little red convertible from a few prompts ago. I hope you like it.

Balloons on the Bumper

“Where to today?” asked Amy.

“A party,” said Lucy, tying balloons to the bumper of their little red convertible.

“Whose party?”

“Teddy’s. He’s getting married.”

“I didn’t know he had a girlfriend.”

“He doesn’t. He has a unicorn-friend. Mother said I can marry anyone I want. So, Teddy can too.”

“Right. Which way?”

“Over the mountains, across the river, and through the far-away forest.”

“Be home for dinner,” said Mother.

“We will!”

The balloons sailed above the little red car. At the party, the children fluttered with fairies and pranced with unicorns as Teddy and Ollie shared their vows.

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Swimmingly, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.

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55 responses to “Balloons on the Bumper #99WordStories”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    I loved this story!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 💖

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  2. pedometergeek Avatar

    Both stories were just wonderful. The children being children, just perfect. The hen’s party (this term I recently came across in a romance novel I read), made me smile (imagine all of this comment said in a squeaky Minnie Mouse voice). ~nan
    PS. Did you know that helium is running out?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Imagining your comment in a squeaky Minnie Mouse voice gave me a giggle, Nan. Thank you.
      No. I didn’t know helium was running out.
      Is that because it’s so light, it floats away before anyone can catch it? 😉😂 Maybe like my joke, eh?

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      1. pedometergeek Avatar

        Cute joke, Norah, and I got it. If it is light, does that mean the helium has gone on a diet? (another not so good joke on my part.) Seriously, I think helium is running out because it is used so frequently and possibly frivolously. As an element, I am not sure it can be produced easily. ~nan

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Hehehe. That’s a very funny lighthearted joke, Nan. (Just to continue the puns.)
          I was intrigued by your comment about helium running out so I had to search the internet for more information. Seems (according t some) it won’t run out for a long time but stored stocks of it, which aren’t necessary to store any more, are slowly being depleted by filling balloons. 😂

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          1. pedometergeek Avatar

            Wow, another email I missed the first time around. My head must be full of helium. What a ditz I am.

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            1. Norah Avatar

              😂😂😂 Oh, Nan. We can’t read them all. I certainly can’t anyway, so don’t expect anyone else to. 💖

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  3. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    This is a sweet story, Norah. Children of any age would enjoy it. And yes, I still consider myself a child. I wonder why I didn’t get my invitation to the wedding, though?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m sorry you didn’t get your invitation, Hugh. I’m not sure who was in charge of sending them out. Maybe it was delayed in the mail. 😉

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  4. Jules Avatar

    Imagination is a wonderful thing.
    I was at a party last week (at a winery) – the owner was telling us about a company that he heard about that was attempting to put helium in beer!!
    I can just imagine how that would be at any party or BBQ!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Oh my goodness! Helium in beer. I’ve heard of some pretty unusual brews, but not one with helium. What a hoot!

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      1. Jules Avatar

        Not sure if is on the market yet… but that would liven up any party!!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I think so too!

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          1. Jules Avatar

            Indeed. I’ve only had a helium voice once or twice that I can remember! 😀

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I don’t ever remember doing it, bit I’ve heard others.

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  5. dgkaye Avatar

    Such a sweet and imaginative tale Norah. I loved the story about the Hen party too. 🙂 xx

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your kind words of encouragement and support, Debby. 💖

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  6. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    That is a fine family. Congrats to Teddy and Unicorn!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, D.

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  7. Prior... Avatar

    I smiled when I got to the part about
    “Over the mountains, across the river, and through the far-away forest.”
    And said “woods” in my head
    Fun take on the prompt – and a red convertible for adventures is very cool

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Yvette. “Woods” would have worked. We don’t generally talk about woods here, though. We have the bush, the scrub and forests – mainly rainforests. ‘Woods’ would have saved me a word had I thought of it. 😂

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        Well the fact that you didn’t use “woods” is what have me the twist – because somewhere in my brain the little ditty has that phrase with woods
        And so in my case / the other words were better for this fiction

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        1. Norah Avatar

          It’s interesting it made you think of a ditty. I wonder what it is.

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          1. Prior... Avatar

            Okay – here is one thing – https://jacksonholemagazine.com/over-the-mountains-and-through-the-woods/

            But I realized it was actually “over the river and through the woods ”
            And not the mountains – hahaha

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Thanks, Yvette. Looks like I unknowingly combined two different things. I wouldn’t be choosing to travel that pass at any time, but I did enjoy the song. How cute! It really does have a catchy ‘join in’ tune.

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              1. Prior... Avatar

                well it has been fun to connect with this theme – have a nice day 🙂

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          2. Prior... Avatar

            Over The River And Through The Woods is a traditional, American folk song and nursery rhyme that is often used for Thanksgiving day. The song from 1844 is actually often called “The New-England Boy’s Song about Thanksgiving Day”

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Thanks for sharing it. It’s very cute.

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  8. calmkate Avatar

    what a totally delightful fantasy!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Kate. It’s good to have an imagination. 🙂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        certainly kept me sane 😉

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  9. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is a delightful story, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie.

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  10. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    A beautiful story about children’s joy and imagination and acceptance, Norah. It gave me such a smile! ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m so pleased, Diana. Thank you for your generous comment.

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  11. Anne Goodwin Avatar

    Sweet story. We call them hen parties and I’m glad to say I’ve never been to one. Nowadays they last the whole weekend and often involve a trip abroad. Your balloons sound more fun.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I’ve been to a couple, but not many, and never one abroad. Maybe going abroad is easier over there than it is here. 😂 Balloons usually mean fun. I worry about their environmental impact now. I wonder what would be a suitable substitute.

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  12. Jim Borden Avatar

    fun story. and congrats to Teddy and Ollie 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m sure they appreciate your wishes, Jim. Thanks.

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  13. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Yes, “hen’s party” sounds like a derogatory term. Men don’t have “rooster parties.” Inhaling helium and uttering a few words is always good for a laugh.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yes, inhaling helium doesn’t go out of date. 🙂

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  14. beth Avatar

    the gift that kept on giving! )

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yes! Thank you. 💖

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  15. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Good story, though confusing!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jacqui. I’m sorry it was confusing. I wonder what I could have done to make it less so. Back to the drawing/writing board.

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      1. Jacqui Murray Avatar

        Maybe ‘confusing’ was the wrong word. Certainly a surprise ending!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I’ll accept surprising. Thank you. 🙂

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