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A Smear of Jam #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a smear of jam. Is it across a slice of toast, a white shirt, or something unexpected? The jam could be the focus or detail that ads a twist. Who are the characters with the jam and where are they situated in space and time? Go where the prompt leads!

This is my playful response. I hope you enjoy it.

A Smear of Jam

Teddy hoped heโ€™d get away with it. His paws were clean and his eyes unblinking as he crossed his heart and hoped โ€“ well, what could a teddy bear hope? 

Ollie decided to have some fun. He overloaded the slow-thinking Teddy with questions faster than his processing speed.

 โ€œAdmit it. You ate my jam.โ€

โ€œOkay.โ€ Teddy crumbled. โ€œHow did you know?โ€

Ollie smiled. โ€œI donโ€™t need to be Sherlock. Youโ€™re the only one here. Besides, youโ€™ve a smear of jam on your nose.โ€

โ€œSorry, Ollie.โ€

โ€œNever mind,โ€ said Ollie. โ€œBut be honest next time โ€“ or hide all evidence.โ€ They laughed.

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous promptย Love Letters to Nature, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.

Comments

36 responses to “A Smear of Jam #99WordStories”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    A sweet story worth spreading. I like how the stuffed animals carry on without the children, as we children know they do.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much for you lovely comment, D. I’m pleased you ‘get’ it. ๐Ÿ’–

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  2. Elizabeth Avatar

    Beautiful story, it made me smile! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Elizabeth.

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  3. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

    What a delightful story, Norah! I especially liked the lesson tucked in between the jam and bread.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen. Not too didactic, I hope.

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  4. Liz H Avatar

    Sweet as jam on toast! A demonstration that a smear of jam, like a spoonful of sugar, leads to a delightful learning opportunity!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for reading and placing me in such good company, Liz. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Patricia Tilton Avatar

    That was a sweet, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, Patricia.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jules. ๐Ÿ™‚ I like your new avatar.

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  6. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Norah, this is adorable. My mom gave away my old teddy a few years ago and I was heart broken. She didn’t realise I would be upset, bless her!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Poor teddy. I’m sure he was heartbroken too. You can’t get him back?

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      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        No, she threw him away.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          ๐Ÿ˜ข

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  7. Jennie Avatar

    Delightful, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  8. Darlene Avatar

    That smear of jam is always a give-away! A cute story.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It sure is, Darlene. I’m pleased you enjoyed the story.

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  9. Kate Avatar

    An adorable story, Norah. I liked the line: “He overloaded the slow-thinking Teddy with questions faster than his processing speed.” It’s so easy to trip up these cuddly little pets. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Beth.

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  10. Anne Goodwin Avatar

    Sweet story. These toys are developing their characters nicely.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Sometimes a cuddly toy is just what is needed. Thank you, Anne. Toys. Children. I’m enjoying my second childhood. Or maybe it’s still my first. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robin.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Aw, thanks, Jacqui.

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  11. srbottch Avatar

    Good lesson for a bear, or anyone. You got to the point promptly and made it poignant. ๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for you lovely comment, Steve.

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      1. srbottch Avatar

        Have a great day! Now, whereโ€™d I put that jamโ€ฆ

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  12. Miss Judy Avatar

    Cute story, Norah! Made me smile.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased. Thank you, Judy. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’–

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