This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a smear of jam. Is it across a slice of toast, a white shirt, or something unexpected? The jam could be the focus or detail that ads a twist. Who are the characters with the jam and where are they situated in space and time? Go where the prompt leads!
This is my playful response. I hope you enjoy it.
A Smear of Jam
Teddy hoped he’d get away with it. His paws were clean and his eyes unblinking as he crossed his heart and hoped – well, what could a teddy bear hope?
Ollie decided to have some fun. He overloaded the slow-thinking Teddy with questions faster than his processing speed.
“Admit it. You ate my jam.”
“Okay.” Teddy crumbled. “How did you know?”
Ollie smiled. “I don’t need to be Sherlock. You’re the only one here. Besides, you’ve a smear of jam on your nose.”
“Sorry, Ollie.”
“Never mind,” said Ollie. “But be honest next time – or hide all evidence.” They laughed.
Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.
Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Love Letters to Nature, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.
Norah Colvin 
A sweet story worth spreading. I like how the stuffed animals carry on without the children, as we children know they do.
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Thank you so much for you lovely comment, D. I’m pleased you ‘get’ it. 💖
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Beautiful story, it made me smile! 🙂
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Thank you, Elizabeth.
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What a delightful story, Norah! I especially liked the lesson tucked in between the jam and bread.
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Thank you, Colleen. Not too didactic, I hope.
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Sweet as jam on toast! A demonstration that a smear of jam, like a spoonful of sugar, leads to a delightful learning opportunity!
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Thank you for reading and placing me in such good company, Liz. 🙂
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That was a sweet, Norah!
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Thanks so much, Patricia.
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Sweet!
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Thanks, Jules. 🙂 I like your new avatar.
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🙂
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Hi Norah, this is adorable. My mom gave away my old teddy a few years ago and I was heart broken. She didn’t realise I would be upset, bless her!
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Poor teddy. I’m sure he was heartbroken too. You can’t get him back?
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No, she threw him away.
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😢
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Delightful, Norah!
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Thank you, Jennie. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Norah.
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That smear of jam is always a give-away! A cute story.
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It sure is, Darlene. I’m pleased you enjoyed the story.
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An adorable story, Norah. I liked the line: “He overloaded the slow-thinking Teddy with questions faster than his processing speed.” It’s so easy to trip up these cuddly little pets. 🙂
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so cute!
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Thank you, Beth.
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Sweet story. These toys are developing their characters nicely.
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Sometimes a cuddly toy is just what is needed. Thank you, Anne. Toys. Children. I’m enjoying my second childhood. Or maybe it’s still my first. 😉😂
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LOL Loved it!
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Thank you, Robin.
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Too cute.
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Aw, thanks, Jacqui.
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Good lesson for a bear, or anyone. You got to the point promptly and made it poignant. 👍
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Thank you for you lovely comment, Steve.
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Have a great day! Now, where’d I put that jam…
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Cute story, Norah! Made me smile.
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I’m pleased. Thank you, Judy. 😊💖
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