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Optimism #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that is optimistic. Feel free to explore optimism in all its forms from a positive mindset to toxic positivity. Is it a heartfelt story or a devious one? So much wiggle room for the optimistic writer. Go where the prompt leads!

In her article, Charli linked to another on Positive Psychology called Positive Mindset: How to Develop a Positive Mental Attitude.

The article includes this definition from Kendra Cherry at Very Well Mind:

“[P]ositive thinking actually means approaching life’s challenges with a positive outlook. It does not necessarily mean avoiding or ignoring the bad things; instead, it involves making the most of the potentially bad situations, trying to see the best in other people, and viewing yourself and your abilities in a positive light.”

The article goes on to list some of the traits of a positive mindset, many (most) of which we encourage in young children. These traits of a positive mindset are often the building blocks for success in life. They include:

Being optimistic and having a go rather than being defeatist and not even trying.

Accepting that things don’t always work out and being willing to learn from what eventuated.

Being strong and resilience when things don’t work out.

Being grateful for all the good things in life.

As a teacher of young children and an aspiring picture book author (I’m optimistic), I know that things don’t always work out as I’d hoped, but I am resilient and never give up, being grateful for the people and opportunities I have in my life.

As both teacher and writer, I always try to respond to Charli’s prompts with children in mind, either as subject or audience or both. This is my optimistic story. I hope you enjoy it.

Building Blocks

Clare’s tower was almost the tallest she’d ever made. One more block would do it.

Harry accidentally backed into it and sent blocks flying.

“Sorry,” said Harry.

“It’s okay. I can build it again. Wanna help?”

“Sure.”

“We need a bigger base. That one was getting wobbly anyway.”

“Let’s go as high as the roof,” said Harry.

They carefully placed the blocks and soon had to stretch on tiptoes.

Clare stood on a chair. Harry passed the blocks.

“We’re outa blocks,” said Harry. “It won’t reach the roof.”

“Let’s build on the table,” said Clare. “It’ll reach the sky!”

Thank you blog post

Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Lady Shadows, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.

Comments

57 responses to “Optimism #99WordStories”

  1. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Loved it! A better base, a higher ground… It keeps getting better.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you. 🙂

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  2. calmkate Avatar

    Hi Norah, guessing you may have read this but thought it important enough to bring to your attention … https://www.abc.net.au/news/2023-02-09/dad-brook-seal-writes-book-about-son-ziggy-disability-education/101943548

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I hadn’t seen it yet, Kate, but it is an important story. Thanks for sharing.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        thought it would be a very useful tool for your kit and a great one to promote on your blog!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you for thinking of me. 🙂

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  3. Ali Avatar

    Children learn optimism at home and of course at school with wonderful teachers like you. I so agree with your statement!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you.

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  4. Sam "Goldie" Kirk Avatar

    The last line was just so adorable. You portrayed the kiddos at the end so well. I was surprised at the beginning, though. She didn’t get upset? He didn’t mind helping? Some well-behaved kids!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yeah, nice kids. I worked with quite a few. Thank you for your lovely comment.

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  5. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    This story rings true. I have seen this scene in school.
    And I’m with Anne- it will happen.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased it rang true for you.
      Thanks for you vote of confidence. Mine’s running out.

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      1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

        Hang in there, Buddy.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Hanging in like a sloth at the moment. 🙂

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  6. Liz H Avatar

    Step by step, block by block, resetting small goals and optimism reaches the top. Nice story on focus, forgiveness, and cooperation.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much for your lovely affirming comment, Liz.

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  7. Optimism Collection « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

    […] Building Blocks by Norah Colvin […]

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  8. Jules Avatar

    I like the cooperation as well as the optimism!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jules. They’re a good combination, aren’t they?

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  9. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    HI Norah, I always enjoy your pieces. The girl in this piece would definitely have been me.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your kind words, Robbie. I’m pleased you recognised yourself in the story. (Intentional, of course. 😉💖)

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  10. TanGental Avatar

    I’m that Harry.

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  11. Jennie Avatar

    The ending is fabulous, one of your best!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much, Jennie. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome, Norah!

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  12. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    It’s amazing we have to remind people of that, but it’s good there are people who do. Great article.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I agree. It is amazing. I wish the common sense was more commonplace.

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  13. srbottch Avatar

    The world needs more Clares and Harrys (not Megans and Harrys🙀). Very nice take on the topic.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much, Steve. I hadn’t thought of that Harry. Good thing I didn’t choose Megan too. 🙂

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  14. Anne Goodwin Avatar

    Great example of teamwork and problem solving in action.
    PS. I’m also optimistic about your picture book writing career.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I appreciate your kind words and optimism, Anne. 🙂

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  15. Darlene Avatar

    I love this story. Children learn optimism at home and of course at school with wonderful teachers like you. I so agree with your statement, “I know that things don’t always work out as I’d hoped, but I am resilient and never give up, being grateful for the people and opportunities I have in my life.” A philosophy I live by as well.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Darlene, your affirming words are very uplifting. Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a beautiful comment.

      Liked by 1 person

  16. Chel Owens Avatar

    Aspiring to a definite ceiling, Norah; you keep building!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, Chelsea. I will! 🙂

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  17. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    As an eternal optimist, I like stories such as this one, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your kind words, Pete.

      Liked by 1 person

  18. Prior... Avatar

    It had such a pleasant feel and the positivity felt so natural

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Yvette. I appreciate your encouraging comments. That was what I was aiming for.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        I was going to say this in my first comment but hit reply so quickly –
        I then just left
        But coming back today reminded me of it again!
        So I will share —
        Your story here was so wholesome and had this pureness that reminded me of a scene from game of thrones

        Not sure if you are a game of thrones fan- but in season 7 ep1, the musician ed Sheeran sings and Arya (main character) encounters positivity and kindness – and considering the series is dark and heavy – many folks appreciated and were shocked by this scene
        Later on I realized how even more beautiful it was when it unfolds while watching it in real time

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I don’t watch GoT so am unfamiliar with the scene. I appreciate your kind words about my story though.

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          1. Prior... Avatar

            🙂 well I know GOT is NOT for everyone and I am still puzzled how it ended up in my life – lol – but glad it came my way

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I’m just not much of a viewer at the moment. Not sure why, but that’s how it is. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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      2. Prior... Avatar

        Here is the link to the scene

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks for sharing, Yvette. I like what you said. Scenes like that always make me think something terrible is going to happen. I’m pleased it was’t the quiet before the storm.

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          1. Prior... Avatar

            Hi Norah – well said – we felt like something bad was going to happen – but it was delightful and warming – like your story here

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Thank you again, Yvette. 🙂

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  19. beth Avatar

    I absolutely love this and could not agree more – optimism wins the day

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Beth. You’ve brightened my day.

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  20. Book Club Mom Avatar

    A good dose of optimism is always a good thing! Very nice story, Norah 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Barbara. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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      1. Book Club Mom Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah!

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