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Rainbow Flotilla #flashfiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story uses the phrase, “across the water.” It can be any body of water distant or close. Who (or what) is crossing the water and why? Go where the prompt leads!

This is my response. I hope you like it.

Rainbow Flotilla

She wrote a message on each piece of paper and folded them into tiny boats. At the lake, she launched them from the bank, then watched the rainbow flotilla sail across the water. Curious ducks investigated, capsizing one or two, but the rest sailed on. A turtle popped up, knocking one off-course. It smashed on the rocks, but the rest sailed on. A dragonfly alighted on one, enjoying the free ride as the rest sailed on, finally reaching the other side. A child fished one out and opened it to dry. He read the message, then smiled and waved.

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50 responses to “Rainbow Flotilla #flashfiction”

  1. dgkaye Avatar

    A sweet story Norah. And you left us hanging, lol 🙂 x

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Debby. I didn’t mean to leave you hanging though. 🙂

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      1. dgkaye Avatar

        Lol, there must be more coming. 🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          We’ll have to wait and see.

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  2. Jennie Avatar

    Lovely, Norah. It made me smile.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased. Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  3. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is such a lovely piece, Norah. It reminded me of one of Enid Blyton’s stories about some toys on a sail boat.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. I’m delighted it reminded you of an Enid Blyton story. I don’t know or remember that one though.

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  4. therealme331 Avatar
    therealme331

    Very nice writing

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  5. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    What a lovely message this piece of flash holds, Norah. So much going on in such a short piece. I’d love to know what the note said.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      So would I, Hugh. Maybe I need to wait for another prompt from Charli. 😉

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    Ducks, turtles and a stowaway dragonfly; this story was so sweet and gentle and perfection. I’m happy that you let us decide what the message was the child read.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your lovely comment, Michael. It is very special to me.

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  7. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    So sweet, Norah. ⛵ Love the image of the dragonfly sailing on a little boat.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah. I thought a dragonfly hitching a ride was cute.

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  8. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    That is wonderful from start to finish. And the best kind of wave across the water.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, D. I appreciate your kind words.

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  9. calmkate Avatar

    such fun, lovely!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Kate. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        I did indeed!

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  11. Charli Mills Avatar

    Norah, what I love most about your story is that one child connected with another through an act of creativity and kindness.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Charli. Those are two themes I try to work into many of my stories. 💖

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Patricia. 🙂

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  12. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
    Bette A. Stevens

    Delightful, Norah! ⛵ xo

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Bette. 🙂

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  13. Jim Borden Avatar

    what a happy story… I like the top image…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jim. 🙂

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  14. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    What a sweet story, Norah. It put a smile on my face.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased, Miriam. Thank you. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah! 🙂

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  15. Darlene Avatar

    A cute story!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Darlene.

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  16. Damyanti Biswas Avatar

    What a lovely, positive piece of flash, Norah. Thank you for sharing.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your lovely comment. I’m pleased you enjoyed it Damyanti. 💖

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  17. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Lovely story, Norah. Only the child has the superpower of reading.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Anne. Yes, reading is a superpower.

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  18. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Delightful images in my head, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s good to know. Thanks, Pete.

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  19. davidprosser Avatar

    A sweet little story Norah.
    Hugs

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, David. 💖

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  20. beth Avatar

    so cute !

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Beth.

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  21. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Wonderful story and cute idea!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui.

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