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Out of Time #flashfiction

Out of time #flashfiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about lost time. You can write a realistic scenario or something speculative. How does lost time impact the character of your story? Bonus points if you include a 1982 brown rubber watch Go where the prompt leads!

Time is something there never seems to be enough of, and it’s like many other things — if you don’t use it, you lose it.

One common saying is that time is wasted on the young. I don’t think it’s wasted, but I think to young people it seems infinite. It did to me anyway. I thought there was time enough for everything I wanted to achieve. I thought that, as this song from my youth said, time was on my side.

As I got older, I realised that time wasn’t infinite and that in fact, it was not only precious, it was also slipping away.

While we may not entirely be able to make up for lost time, we can always make the most of our present time.

One of my favourite quotes about time, sometimes but not correctly attributed to Einstein, is that its only purpose is to stop everything happening at once. I think this is true of events in both the past and the future. If we are unable to associate them with a date or a context, they may as well have happened or happen at the same time.

If the only time we have is now, we must enjoy it and make the best use of it we can until our time is up and there are no more ‘present’ moments.

Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift, that’s why it’s called the present.

Every day we open that gift with anticipation and use its joys to create our tomorrows.

I guess I don’t need to state the obvious, that I’ve reached that stage of life where there’s more time in the past than the future. However, for as long as I have the present, I’ll be doing my best to make the most of it.

Here’s my response to Charli’s challenge. I hope you enjoy it.

Out of Time

“Time’s up!”

“Not yet! I’m not finished.”

Mallory stared at the page, blank except for some scribbles and a few false starts. Others smiled as they handed in their papers, earning accolades and rewards for tasks successfully completed.

“Please, just a little more time?”

“You’ve already had more than most.”

“I can do it. Promise.”

The timekeeper tapped the watch. “Five more. That’s all.”

Mallory worked frantically until the timekeeper declared, “You’re out of time.”

Mallory smiled, “It’s never too late to begin.”

The timekeeper agreed. “But you could have achieved much more had you not wasted time earlier.”

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55 responses to “Out of Time #flashfiction”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    I love your quotations and music, Norah. This is a theme I can relate to as well! Great flash fiction.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much, Jennie. I appreciate your comments.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome, Norah!

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  2. Jules Avatar

    I enjoy science fiction so when they do an episode on time travel or multiple timelines… well it becomes interesting to wonder if there really could be such things happening. I’ve also watched some movies and read books where the main character goes back in time – as an escape for the present and what the future holds. How would, could we handle it if we had to start all over from a point in past time or from a future that is so foreign that we marvel at every advancement?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I know what you mean, Jules. I guess one of the first stories to question that was Rip Van Winkle (or the earliest one I can think of). Things have changed so much in my life time, sometimes even I feel like I’ve time travelled into an unkown world.

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      1. Jules Avatar

        I think that unknown world for writers is simple labeled “Imagination”. 😉

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        1. Norah Avatar

          That’s a good word. And a good place.

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  3. Ruchira Khanna Avatar
    Ruchira Khanna

    I liked your take, Norah.
    When a student I’ve had moments when I’ve stared at the blank paper regretting over too much sleep or daydreaming that I missed studying that concept. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I appreciate your comment, Ruchira. I think most students have had moments like that.

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  4. Lost Time « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

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  5. Charli Mills Avatar

    Time is but a measurement. When we are in the moment, it doesn’t exist. 😉 Ah, but I can’t seem to squish it all into a single moment, but I do try. Lovely reflection on time, especially pairing the two songs. Your flash makes me wonder how the student spent her time not studying.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Charli. I can never squish enough. Some people seem to squish about three-days-worth into one. I seem to manage one hour into one day. I don’t know how others do it. That’s a good question about how she spent her time when not studying. I wonder if she can recall any memories of it.

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  6. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I’m with Avery. So much of my writing time is spent staring into space. I’m creating.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I agree – that’s how it can be. 🙂

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  7. Jim Borden Avatar

    wonderful flash fiction; and maybe instead of considering time as wasted; it was spent gaining experiences that will be valuable later.

    And you had just mentioned that van Morrison song in one of your comments to me, and just like that, here is it is in your post. I just listened to it, and perhaps no surprise, it was wonderful and made me think, like much of his music.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s a great thought on the flash, Jim. I just hope there will always be a ‘later’. 😂
      I’m pleased you enjoyed Van’s song. It’s one of my favourites. Though I have many and it’s difficult to put one before the other – except Moondance. It’s my fav.

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  8. dgkaye Avatar

    Time is elusive and it flies. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Far too quickly! Like a rocket into space. 🙂

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  9. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    I’m still that way, Norah. It takes time for my mind to warm up. Once it warms up, it starts to flow. I know I’m not wasting time especially when it comes to writing. I don’t like writing dry stuff.
    Great flash, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      The warm up is definitely not wasting time, Miriam. We often need that thinking time, don’t we? Thanks for your kind comment.

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        I’m brewing a little story but the inspiration hasn’t hit yet. Well, I’ll see. Good job on your flash, Norah.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks, Miriam. You just need to sit down and write and let the inspiration flow.
          If only it were that easy. 😅

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  10. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    I love your reflection on time, Norah. And I can relate to how infinite it once was and how quickly it’s now flying by. The “Einstein” quote made me smile. Great story, too. If only we hadn’t wasted time…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, Diana. I don’t feel I’ve wasted time. I just wish I could do more with it. 🙂

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  11. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Great story, Norah. And I love this: “if you don’t use it, you lose it.” So true. So very true. Hitting home with me at the moment. 😉 Hope you’re well.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah. Time has been a strange one this year. It’s not been kind to many of us. We’re doing well here. I hope you are too.

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  12. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    I remember writing an English creative writing exam once, Norah, and finishing and then restarting and changing it. I can remember asking for a few more minutes when I ran over at the end. A very similar situation.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I hope you were given the additional time you needed, Robbie.

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      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        Only a few extra minutes i.e. collecting my paper last. The system was very strict in my day and there were no time extensions or other learner concessions ever.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          As long as it helped. 🙂

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  13. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    Oh, my goodness. I love the quote you included, Norah, but especially “Today is a gift, that’s why it’s called the present.” Now I will look at every day as a gift.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s great, Hugh. It’s one of my favourite quotes. I often remind myself of it. Not everyone has the privilege of experiencing these days.

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  14. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    It was judgmental of the proctor to assume that staring at the blank page was wasting time. Might have been thinking/planning.
    I enjoyed your flash and thank you for the Van Morrison too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yeah. Might have been thinking and planning. Might not too. 🙂 I’m pleased you enjoyed VM. He’s my all time fav.

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  15. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    Prefered Van Morrison to the Stones (I’d forgotten however about the screaming).
    Loved your flash: life as an exam and so sad that some aren’t given enough.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I think you got my intention with the flash. Life was the exam and the examinee hadn’t made enough of earlier opportunities. But you’re right. Many don’t receive the opportunties either.

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  16. calmkate Avatar

    lol a little lesson there for all of us!

    What young men the stones are there, and I absolutely love van Morrison … thanks for music 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed the music, Kate. Van Morrison is my favourite. Stones are second. 🙂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        lol stones don’t rate with me at all but VM is top of the hits 🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Van’s the man for me too. 🙂 I saw him perform live when he was out here in the eighties. That wasn’t so impressive but I love his music, his voice and his lyrics.

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          1. calmkate Avatar

            Joan Baez was the only live concert I was impressed by and Meatloaf was her back up 🙂

            Beach Boys were too stoned to remember any words of their own songs 😦

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Those were the days, eh?
              I’m pleased you enjoyed Joan Baez. I didn’t see her.

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              1. calmkate Avatar

                she was a hero so I had to go and she surpassed all expectations 🙂

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                1. Norah Avatar

                  Sounds wonderful. Where did you see her?

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                  1. calmkate Avatar

                    Sydney Show grounds, the original ones obviously 🙂

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  17. TanGental Avatar

    I’m the polar opposite of Mallory… can’t stand the pressure!!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      So you must just keep at all along. That’s a good strategy. It doesn’t work to leave everything until the last minute.

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  18. Chel Owens Avatar

    I’m definitely a Mallory, and think some need that extra leniency at the end!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I wish you all the time you need. 🙂

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  19. CarolCooks2 Avatar

    I’m in that camp Norah and making the most of my present…A lovely post 🙂 xx

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Carol. The present is perfect. 🙂

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