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The Interlude #flash fiction

The Interlude flash fiction

Carrot Ranch flash fiction challenge The Interlude

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about an interlude. It can be a pause between two key moments, the pause between acts in a play, an intermission, or a temporary amusement Go where the prompt leads you!

Instead of wrapping up my story in a post this week, I’ve simply written a response.

The Interlude

It was intended as an interlude filling the gap between childhood and marriage. Hired as governess to a grazier friend of a friend, they relished the possibility she’d meet a wealthy future-husband—plenty of single men in the bush— while she made herself useful.  But life doesn’t always comply with one’s plans, especially for another. The grazier’s children were eager students and she taught them well. Soon others came to learn from her tuition. They built a small schoolhouse which filled with willing minds. While suitors were a-plenty, none captured her love for teaching which became her main event.

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45 responses to “The Interlude #flash fiction”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    Oh, I loved this story! It filled me up. Thanks, Norah. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. I love your comment. 💖

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        My pleasure, Norah. ❤️

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  2. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    The joy is when you married what you love – your teaching, you and teaching are inseparable. Great job, Norah! 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Miriam. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        I’m glad we share the same passion, Norah.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          As am I, Miriam. It’s great to connect with those of similar mind.

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          1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

            Exactly, and read each others minds, Norah!

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              1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

                😊 😊 I’ll be on 2 trips for the next 2 weeks.

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  3. nightlake Avatar

    This was a lovely story and a good ending

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you. I’m pleased you enjoyed it. 🙂

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  4. Charli Mills Avatar

    Sometimes we find our main event in the interlude. I like how your character took charge of her own life and passion, Norah.

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  5. dgkaye Avatar

    Old school thinking Norah. Do what you love – wrapped up perfectly ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Aw, thanks, Debby. I appreciate your kind words.

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  6. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    What a lovely story. I see lots of friends in this one.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui. Your comment made me smile. I have to admit the story is little bits of many I know or know of. 🙂

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  7. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    I love how the stopgap became the main event, which you describe so well. It’s not so long ago that it took an extremely brave woman to prioritise her career over marriage. How lucky we are now nowadays to have a bit more choice.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It is indeed far better to have the choice. Sometimes I am amazed at women of yesteryear. While the stereotype is not always flattering, there were those who broke the mould. My heroine was one of those.

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      1. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

        Indeed. Sadly some still can’t bear to see women taking their authority. Some very nasty politics right now in the UK.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Yeah. Just when you thought it couldn’t get worse …

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  8. Jim Borden Avatar

    well done; you’ve told a wonderful story in just 99 words, and it had a happy ending!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jim. Yes, a happy ending. 🙂

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      1. Jim Borden Avatar

        I guess I’m a sucker for happy endings!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Aren’t we all. 🙂

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  9. Darlene Avatar

    Excellent!! She followed her heart.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      She did. Although she didn’t know it was until she tried it.

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      1. Darlene Avatar

        Which is often how it goes in life!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          That’s true.

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  10. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    This is a lovely piece, Norah. I love how you reflect your love of teaching in your writing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. I’m pleased it shines through.

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Chelsea Owens Avatar

    I’d prefer to marry my teaching. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Each to their own, I guess. 🙂

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  12. calmkate Avatar

    very sweet but often those teachers who go bush end up with local yokels but seldom adapt to the isolation

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Kate. I guess it depends on the individual.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Pauline. 🙂

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  13. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Ha! Love this response and it certainly doesn’t need any wrapping. It says so much just so. Love what you do and do what you love. This is a good old school school story with a lesson or two subtly folded within.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, D. I’m pleased you enjoyed it. 🙂

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  14. Book Club Mom Avatar

    This is wonderful, Norah! I love your writing style here 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate your words. 🙂

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