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Bones #99Word Stories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about bones. It can be any genre or tone. Is it spooky, irreverant, poignant? Go where the prompt leads!

All I could think of at first was the children’s song, β€˜The head bone’s connected to the neck bone …’ and it took me a while to come up with an idea. Once I got an idea, the ending eluded me. I finally decided to go all-out horror, which is unusual for me, to follow up my entry Beware or Be Scared in the Halloweensie Contest run by Susanna Leonard Hill. That entry was meant to be as Halloween humorous as it was scary. I hope it succeeded. On its own, this one may lack the humour. I hope you β€˜enjoy’ it anyway.

Make No Bones About It

β€œGo and get changed.”

 β€œBut, Muuuum —”

β€œYou will not go to the party dressed like that.”

β€œWhy?”

β€œIt’s not appropriate.”

β€œBut it’s dress up. It’s Halloween!”

β€œYes! A skeleton or a ghost. Not a princess. Princesses don’t do Halloween.”

β€œIf I can’t be a princess, I’m not —” The door slammed to punctuate her sentence perfectly.

Mum shook her head. She was teased enough, without being a princess on Halloween.

The following morning, when bones found in the middle of a mystery sticky stinky sludge were identified as her bullies, Margie and Mum gave thanks for their disagreement.

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13 responses to “Bones #99Word Stories

  1. Jules Avatar

    oooh….not I need to read that other piece.

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  3. dgkaye Avatar

    Ooh scary. Always listen to mom. πŸ™‚ x

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Definitely! πŸ™‚

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  4. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Norah, this is clever. A great piece.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie.

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  5. Anne Goodwin Avatar

    I’m glad the bullies got their comeuppance.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      They did, but probably in a more drastic way than I’d really like. πŸ˜‚πŸπŸ‘»

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  6. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    That leaves a lot to think about! Hoo boy.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yeah. Fiction. All fiction. πŸπŸ‘»

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