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Up and Away #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, “up and away.” You can imagine a story from the photo of hot air balloons, a flying superhero, a natural wonder, or any other direction your inspiration goes. Go where the prompt leads!

This is my response. I hope you enjoy it.

Up and Away

April placed a coin onto his palm.

“What will I make for you?”

“A magic balloon, please.”

He scanned her face, searched deep within her eyes, read her every wish.

“A magic balloon,” he said, selecting a dark blue.

He stretched it this way and that, then blew. As the balloon filled, the blue lightened and brightened. It shed sparkles that glistened in the sunlight. He knotted the end, held it out, then twisted and twirled and pulled it into a star.

He wound the ribbon around April’s wrist. “Up and away!” he whispered, as April was whisked aloft.

Thank you blog post

Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Never Ending can be read at the Carrot Ranch here. Sadly, I didn’t get to join in with that prompt due to a (brief and mild) tussle with covid.

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27 responses to “Up and Away #99WordStories”

  1. pedometergeek Avatar

    Enjoyed this story about a magic balloon, Norah. What an uplifting, happy story. ~nan

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you, Nan.

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  2. calmkate Avatar

    So glad it was only a mild tussle … love this!

    Reminds me of my magical umbrella … it appears to be a pretty blue but once it’s wet little flowers appear all over it! A sparkly blue against the lovely background 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I love the sound of your umbrella – gorgeous!

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        I certainly think so, bought from the house with no steps gift shop!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Is that close to you?

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          1. calmkate Avatar

            yes only about 15 minutes drive … very near to where I lead meditations 🙂

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Nice. 🙂

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  3. Up and Away « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

    […] Up and Away by Norah Colvin […]

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  4. dgkaye Avatar

    A sweet story Norah. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Debby.

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  5. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    What a wonderful dream. To see from on high what the world holds.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’d love to do that. 🙂

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  6. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
    Bette A. Stevens

    The magic touch! Well done, Norah. Sharing…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Bette. 🙂

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      1. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
        Bette A. Stevens

        My pleasure, Norah! 💞

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  7. Darlene Avatar

    A very cute story. There is something about kids and balloons.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      There is. I wonder what will replace them. 🙂

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  8. Jennie Avatar

    Lovely, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  9. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Your lovely flash reminded me of that Pixar movie Up. A fabulous story and not just for kids.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I haven’t seen that one yet. I’ll have to look out for it. Thanks for the recommendation, Anne.

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  10. beth Avatar

    love the whimsy of this one!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Beth. 🙂

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  11. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Excellent job, Norah. Balloons are a magical thing. In the next couple of years, one of my goals is to take a hot-air balloon ride.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That would be fabulous, Pete. I think a hot air balloon ride would be amazing. I wish I was brave enough …

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