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The Disappearing Trick

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charlie Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about disappearance. It can be an event, act, or subtle theme. Who or what disappears? Does it fade or explode? Can it be explained or experienced? Go where the prompt leads!

My story includes the same characters that appeared in my previous story Change is Coming. I hope you enjoy it.

The Disappearing Trick

Jamie tore open his gifts—a book from Pauline, a soccer ball from Mum and, from Grandma and Grandpa, a magic set.

“Look, Rabbit,” said Jamie. “I can make things disappear.”

Everyone smiled.

Jamie prepared his performance.

“For my first trick, I will make Rabbit disappear. Everyone, close your eyes. Abba. Dabba. Caboo! Open your eyes. Look. Rabbit disappeared.”

The family clapped.

“Where’s Rabbit?” asked Pauline.

“For my next trick, I will pull Rabbit out of the hat. Abba. Dabba. Caboo!”

Everyone cheered.

“I wish it was that easy to disappear,” Mum whispered.

“We’ll help,” said Grandma and Grandpa.

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Ready for a Change can be read at the Carrot Ranch here.

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22 responses to “The Disappearing Trick”

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  2. Gloria Avatar

    Aw, so cute. But then they grow up and we wish they were small again!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s so true, Gloria. They grow up far too fast.

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  4. Charli Mills Avatar

    Norah, I can remember the allure of disappearing into a hat or other secluded space as a mother of three youngsters born within four years. How quickly though, they disappear on their own.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s so true, Charli. Too soon.

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  5. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is very cute story. It is very hard for mothers to disappear even to the bathroom for a few minutes.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It is indeed. I remember it well.

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  6. dgkaye Avatar

    Well told with varying inuendos of different member’s perspectives on ‘disappearing’. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you so much, Debbie. It’s lovely to have you back in the blogosphere again.

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      1. dgkaye Avatar

        Thanks so much Norah. It is good to be back. ❤

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  7. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Fun twist at the end, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui.

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  8. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Smart follow-up to the previous flash. It takes skill to show the reader both the child’s and adult’s perspectives in so few words. And it’s all the more poignant thinking how the mother and grandparents are trying to protect the boy and celebrate his birthday when they must be feeling so anxious themselves.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your lovely comment, Anne. You always ‘get’ the gist of my stories. I appreciate that.
      Sorry I haven’t been over your way recently. I’ve had lots of distractions and internet problems to boot. Hopefully, will get there soon.

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  9. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Good one Buddy. Looks like another serial is emerging. I’m glad this family has Granma and Granpa. It doesn’t seem fair that she and the kids (and Rabbit) are on the run.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It’s not fair. Sadly, life isn’t for many. I’ll see if any other events for the series arise. I’m not committed yet.

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      1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

        No pressure. Have a good week Norah.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks, D. You too!

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  10. Mrs ExtraOrdinary Avatar

    As a fellow teacher, it is lovely to see you writing and enjoying writing here. It is so important that we continue to write for enjoyment. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your lovely comment.

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