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The Last Piece of Pie

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about free pie. What kind of pie and freedom? Who is involved with pies? How is it free? Go where the prompt leads!

Charli wrote about free edible pie that was available at College in honour of Pi Day. Of course, my mind went somewhere else.

I thought about the pieces of pie we try our best to collect as we travel around and around the Trivial Pursuit board, hoping that when we get a question for a piece of pie, we’ll get one we can answer correctly.

The most difficult is the final question, when the tray is filled with every flavour of pie and the other players decide which question will be the most difficult to answer. This family allowed each player to choose one free piece of pie at the beginning of the game in order to speed it along. I hope you enjoy the story.

The Last Piece of Pie

Josie wished they’d hurry. It was past her bedtime.

“Blue’s the hardest,” said Adam.

“Maybe for you, but she got it before,” said Bridget.

“She got them all, dur.”

“What was her free one? Anyone notice?” said Dirk.

“Yellow,” said Ellen. “Definitely.”

“Here’s your question, Grandma,” said Dirk.

Josie’s eyes were closed. Her mouth was open. A gentle snore rumbled out.

“Is the right answer,” said Adam. Everyone giggled.

Josie snorted awake. “What did you decide?”

“It’s okay, Grandma. We declared you the winner.”

Win or lose didn’t matter in the pursuit of happiness. It was all rather trivial.

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Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Robotic Writers can be read at the Carrot Ranch here.

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54 responses to “The Last Piece of Pie”

  1. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    Loved reading this fun little story! The title is perfect. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you. 🙂

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  2. pedometergeek Avatar

    Norah, I thought your take on the free pie prompt was epic. So clever and not trivial at all. ~nan

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for your lovely comment, Nan. I appreciate it. 🙂

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  4. Charli Mills Avatar

    Ha! That’s a clever take on free pie, Norah! I remember playing Trivial Pursuit with the kids and filling those circles with wedges. Sweet ending, too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks, Charli.

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  5. roughwighting Avatar

    Haha. Being a grandmother, and not good at trivial pursuit games (or any games, for that matter – I always lose) I laughed and smirked at your humorous story. Grandmother may have even been pretending to snore, just to end the game and keep everyone HAPPY! Well done. 😉

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed the story, Pam. And we grandmas have been known to do our best to keep everyone happy, haven’t we. 😉💖

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      1. roughwighting Avatar

        For sure!! 🙂

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  6. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Norah, what a clever usage of the prompt. Well done!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. 🙂

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  7. Jennie Avatar

    Yes, that was the pursuit of happiness! Well done, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  8. Jules Avatar

    I like this Pie story. I am not a whiz at trivia. I once played that game but they had the answer to one question wrong. And it made me loose… so I never played it again.
    A thumb is not a finger. However all fingers are digits. The game had some misinformation about that fact. …. I lived. 😉

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you lived Jules. I’d love to know the context for the question. We do usually refer to having five fingers on each hand, even though one is a thumb. I’m sorry you never played again. I’m terrible at trivia but it doesn’t stop me having a laugh. Your situation reminds me of a Seinfeld episode (did you watch Seinfeld?) when George was playing TP with the ‘bubble boy’. The bubble boy was about to win with the correct answer ‘Moors’. Unfortunately, the answer was incorrectly printed as ‘moops’ on the card and George had great delight in not letting the boy win. Typical George behaviour. 😅

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      1. Jules Avatar

        I enjoy other tivia and other games.
        The other day our grandson was over – Gramps, Grama and Grandson played good old ‘Chinese Checkers’ with marbles. I won!
        Then we played an odd card game the Grandson brought called ‘Exploding Cats!’

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        1. pedometergeek Avatar

          Jules, I have played Exploding Cars with two of my grandsons, too. It is a different game for sure. ~nan

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          1. Jules Avatar

            Cars, cats… problably not much different. Have to match two to get the advantage of the play. But hard to play when the rules keep changing 😉 Our Guy kept trying to change the rules (one time) for Chinese Checkers! Finally it was – nope these are the rules Kido 😉 ~JP

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I’ve just watched a video about Exploding Kittens. I guess it’s the same thing. It sounds a bit complicated.

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              1. Jules Avatar

                If it was a card came… perhaps not much different 😉

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          2. Norah Avatar

            Two recommendations! I’ll have to check it out. 🙂

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        2. Norah Avatar

          I haven’t heard of ‘Exploding Cats!’ It sounds fun. I do like a game of Chinese Checkers. 🙂

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  9. calmkate Avatar

    oh how I wish more would play like this … if families did it with games we could never contemplate wars!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      And wouldn’t that be wonderful.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        joy all round 🙂

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  10. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Ha! Trivial Pursuit! Haven’t played that since I was a child. Cute story with a lovely ending, as always. Happy autumn! 🍂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Sarah. I hope you’re springing into spring. Enjoy!

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      1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

        There’s mostly slush and mud but in a month or so there will be spring flowers. 🌷🌷🌷

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Ah! That’s something to look forward to. 🙂

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  11. Dayne Sislen, Children's Book Illustrator Avatar

    I love that you took the word pie in a different direction. Loving story.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Dayne. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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  12. Darlene Avatar

    A cute story! Loved playing Trivial Pursuit. Especially any questions related to books and authors.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I think trivia is fun when you know the answers! I’m probably better (or used to be) at problem solving rather than knowing answers.

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  13. Kate Avatar

    I don’t remember the pies in Trivial Pursuit – obviously it’s been a long time since I played it. I do remember the questions and trying to outwit my brother with answers though. I like it when games are played in fun. Great take on the prompt.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much for your lovely comment, Kate. The wedges in Trivial Pursuit were often referred to as pieces of pie – in my circles anyway. 🙂

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  14. joanne the geek Avatar

    That was a good idea! I hadn’t thought about Trivial Pursuit.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks. 🙂

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  15. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Sweet story. I used to have 2 sets of that game but had forgotten about the pies. Clever take on the prompt.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I couldn’t side-step the trivial in this one. 🙂

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  16. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    What a clever take on the pie prompt. This is a kind caring family, though I did sense some competitive edges.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, D. I think they enjoy the competition, but it’s all in fun.

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  17. Prior... Avatar

    Like the end with “sometimes trivial” with the playing of trivia pursuit
    😊☀️

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    1. Norah Avatar

      So much trivia. 😁 Thank you, Yvette.

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  18. Jim Borden Avatar

    congrats to Grandma! wonderful story about family ties, and pies…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jim. 🙂

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      1. Jim Borden Avatar

        you are welcome, Norah!

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  19. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    That’s true, innit, and we sometimes forget.

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