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The Hens’ Party

At the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills has been celebrating completion of 21 months of studying and writing for an MFA.  To help us get in the party mood, and to give herself freedom to celebrate, she gave writers an extra week to respond to the challenge In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about party hens. Who are these chickens and why do they party? Go where the prompt leads!

This is my response. I hope you enjoy it.

The Hens’ Party

The hens cackled with anticipation of their leader’s address, then quietened as the activist took the stage.

“Ladies and ladies,” she began. “We don’t have to take this anymore — all day cooped up, laying on demand, while His Lordship struts about crowing, taking credit for the sun shining. Now it’s our time to shine!”

The assembly fluffed their feathers and stamped their feet. “We won’t take it anymore!”

“Ladies, what do we want?”

“Hen’s rights!”

“When do we want them?”

“Now!”

“First, we slip him a sleeping pill, then tomorrow — we make the sun come up!”

“Hens rule forever!”

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35 responses to “The Hens’ Party”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    Love it! Well done, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  3. Patricia Tilton Avatar

    Thank you for putting a smile on my face! Very clever wordplay!

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  4. Kate Avatar

    I’m clucking and chuckling. Great take on the prompt. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Kate. 🙂

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  5. Darlene Avatar

    That was very clever. Loved it!!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Darlene.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Bette.

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  6. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This gave me a jolly good laugh, Norah. Thank you.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. I’m pleased.

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  7. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Well done! I was expecting the Brit’s hen party.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui. I’m sorry to disappoint. I don’t even know what the Brit’s hen party is. 🤣

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  8. Anne Goodwin's next novel is out May 29th Avatar

    Great ff. PS. Who DOES make the sun come up?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Great question, Anne. In fact, nobody makes the sun come up. The earth turns towards it. 🤣

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  9. Jim Borden Avatar

    it likes there has been a coup in the coop

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  10. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    Cluck, cluck, cluck… You cracked me up, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s good to hear, Miriam. Thank you.

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  11. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    I love it , Norah.
    Did you ever see the animated movie Chicken Run? Watch it with your grandkids. Or just you.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, D. I’m not sure if I’ve seen Chicken Run. Was that a Mel Gibson movie? I’ll put it on the list.

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      1. Anne Goodwin's next novel is out May 29th Avatar

        You’re joking? It’s a fabulous animation from the UK. And not just for kids:
        https://www.aardman.com/work/chicken-run-02/

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Yes, but Mel Gibson did the voice of Rocky. https://bit.ly/3u6eO2k

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I need to be questioned. When I asked the question, it was just that – lazy me not wanting to take two seconds to Google it. When you and D. responded as you did, then I had to check. Please doubt.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          😉😂🤣

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        2. Anne Goodwin's next novel is out May 29th Avatar

          Actually, I’ve heard of him but I’m not sure I’d recognise him if I passed him in the street. (Fat chance.)

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          1. Norah Avatar

            I guess I’m more familiar because he’s Australian, but he has starred in many Hollywood movies. He was a big star for a while.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Becky. 🙂

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  12. Pastor Cathy Avatar

    Cheep cheap.

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