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Young love #flash fiction

young love #flashfiction

Carrot Ranch flash fiction challenge - romance

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a romance. Focus on the relationship between two people. Build tension and end on a happy(ish) note. Go where the prompt leads!

I have been otherwise occupied the last couple of weeks, working to publisher deadlines that took precedence over my own, and haven’t been able to join in. I couldn’t let this one pass. I hope you like it.

True love

Although he’d written love notes and brought flowers nearly every day, he’d caught her unawares when, one morning, he whispered, “Will you marry me?”

His eyes glistened with hope, but she hesitated. She’d not encouraged him, not that way. How could she have anticipated this?

Crouching to look him in the eyes, she said, “Thank you for the compliment, Josh. You’re very sweet, but I can’t. I’m sorry.”

His lips quivered as he asked, “Why not, Miss Ruby?”

“Josh, I’m already married,” she said, showing her rings.

He was downcast momentarily, then suddenly brightened. “You could get a divorce?”

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47 responses to “Young love #flash fiction”

  1. Norah Colvin @ Readilearn (Priorhouse Interview) – priorhouse blog Avatar

    […] fiction piece to check out from Norah is this “young love” post here about Josh’s marriage proposal.  And here is our correspondence from 2019 (it really was […]

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  2. LucciaGray Avatar

    How sweet😍

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  3. dgkaye Avatar

    Ah, the broken hearted! Well done Norah. Happy to hear about your busy times in publishing. You are a busy bee! ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, Debby. It’s been a busy year, and more so recently. It’s great to earn a little income from writing though and I have to take the paying jobs when they come along. I’m sorry I haven’t been over to visit you and comment as much as usual. I will get there, eventually. 🙂

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      1. dgkaye Avatar

        Please, never apologize Norah. We all have lots going and eventually, we all get there! And I did see you over at my blog this morning. ❤ I also saw you won one of the Rodeo challenges!!!!! Way to go Nora. Huge congrats!!!! ❤

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks so much for your understanding, and for your congratulations, Debby. I can’t believe I won the TUFF contest. I’m totally blown away. I don’t think I’ve ever won a writing contest before. 🙂

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          1. dgkaye Avatar

            Well it was your turn to shine!!! ❤

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Thank you so much, Debby. Your comment means a lot to me. I very much appreciate your ongoing support. It bolsters my spirits constantly.

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              1. dgkaye Avatar

                I know what you mean Norah. Praise and a great book review can certainly make someone’s day! But I’m just saying what’s in my heart. I just call them as I see them. ❤ And you are most deserved. xx

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                1. Norah Avatar

                  Thank you, Debby. I appreciate you. 💖

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  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    That is well done, Norah. Spot on.
    I tried responding earlier but was on the road and my new fangled machine and I are still having difficulties when it comes to wordpress.
    What you are busy with is all good. And, while you have been less present than usual, it just so happens that Aussie has been around Carrot Ranch so it all works out.
    Take care, Buddy.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, D. I’m sure you’ve received many proposals over the years.
      No worries about your ‘later’ response. I’m weeks behind with my reading and responding. Tech problems are a pain at the best of times. Worse when away from our comfort zone.
      I’m pleased Aussie has been filling in for me but I don’t like to miss out on the fun either. 🙂

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  5. Jennie Avatar

    Very sweet, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  6. Jim Borden Avatar

    so you’re saying he’s got a chance!

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    1. Jim Borden Avatar

      my wife teaches four-year-olds and gets these proposals all the time 🙂
      it keeps me on my toes!

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      1. Norah Avatar

        Many preschool teachers do, Jim. I’m pleased you saw it as authentic. It can be good for you to have a ‘little’ competition at times. 🙂

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    2. Norah Avatar

      He thinks he’s got a chance. 🙂

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  7. beth Avatar

    this one’s funny! bravo

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Beth. 🙂

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  8. calmkate Avatar

    so sweet … good luck with that publishing! What is it?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Kate. I’ve been freelancing for three educational publishers this year. All different sorts of jobs but all educational. Keeps me on my toes and it’s nice to do something with (a little) financial reward.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        yea for you, you have so much to share 🙂

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks, Kate. It’s nice to earn a little income. 🙂

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          1. calmkate Avatar

            yes would help most of us Norah, but we don’t all have your talent 🙂

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I don’t know about talent, Kate. It’s mostly hard work. 🙂

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              1. calmkate Avatar

                and knowledge, can’t do it without the background Norah 🙂

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                1. Norah Avatar

                  That’s true. I have done the training and constantly read in an attempt to keep abreast, but it still requires a lot of research and hard work. I appreciate your support.

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                  1. calmkate Avatar

                    I bet it does but also very healthy to exercise our grey matter as much as possible 🙂

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                    1. Norah Avatar

                      I totally agree! I’d like to keep mine as long as possible. 🙂

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  9. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    Glad you were able to join in again with such a sweet story. Hurrah for Josh, that persistence will pay off one day/

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I’m sure he’ll get over Miss Ruby one day. 🙂

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  10. Charli Mills Avatar

    Good to see you surface from deadlines with a sweet romance, Norah! Your presense has been missed. I hope there are good outcomes to the deadlines.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      The work and deadlines continue. I just gave myself a brief (99 word) break. The work I do for my own sites doesn’t pay. This other work pays a little, which is nice. 🙂

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  11. Prior... Avatar

    awe – so cute!! delightful ending

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks so much, Yvette. 🙂

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  12. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    This is very sweet, Norah. Good luck with your publishing deadlines.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Robbie. I keep working towards them. 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Robert. 🙂

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      1. Robert Kirkendall Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah 🙂

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  13. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
    Bette A. Stevens

    Sweet… ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Bette.

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