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Shame #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story exploring shame as an emotion or theme. Consider how to use shame to drive a cause-and-effect story. How does it impact a character? Is there a change? Go where the prompt leads!

Shameful — Conversation Overheard

“Look at that,” one mother tut-tutted. “So shameful.”

“What is?”

“That. I’d be totally ashamed to send my child to school looking like that.”

“That’s a shame.”

“Unfortunately, our children have to mix with the likes of that. Have people no shame?”

“I’m not sure what you mean by the likes of that. Our world is enriched by diversity. The more the better, I say. It’s true some people have no shame. Nor should they. They should be proud of who they are. Except for the likes of you. You’re shameless. Shame on you.”

“Well, I —”

“Never. Obviously.”

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Floppy as Puppy Ears, including mine, can be read at the Carrot Ranch.

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34 responses to “Shame #99WordStories”

  1. Gloria Avatar

    Don’t think attitudes like that will ever change. However, I don’t see it as much as I did many years ago.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased it’s becoming less common too, Gloria. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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  2. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Good on ya, Buddy. A bystander isn’t far removed from a bully or a bigot. Your character stood up!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s true too, D. Thank you.

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  3. pedometergeek Avatar

    Norah,
    How perfect! Great turnaround on the shamer. We do need diversity! I love it!
    `nan

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Nan. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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  4. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Fantastic little snippet of overheard conversation!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Nicole.

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  6. dgkaye Avatar

    Bravo Norah. Sometimes those shamers need to be shamed. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      They do indeed. Thank you, Debby. 🙂

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  7. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    HI Norah, this is an interesting piece. I am reading The Second Mrs. Astor and am learning a lot about the world of the blue stockings and knickerbockers in the USA in 1910. It completely boggles my mind how these people thought they were so superior to everyone else because they had ancestors who showed initiative. It doesn’t mean they have any and usually lightening doesn’t strike twice in a family.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I haven’t heard of the blue stockings and knickerbockers, Robbie, but it sounds interesting. I’ll have to think on what you say about lightning not striking twice though.

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  8. Jules Avatar

    I once taught at a rather selective nursery school… and I can absolutely hear this conversation! Also the reason I’ve left several organizations… I wasn’t up to snuff. And didn’t need that rare air to breathe.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I wouldn’t have lasted either Jules. I think they weren’t good enough for you.

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      1. Jules Avatar

        One tries to fit in… but sometimes it isn’t worth the effort to belong to groups that are … ‘exlusive’. …thanks.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I agree. Sometimes we don’t want to fit in if the company doesn’t suit us.

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  9. Jennie Avatar

    That was powerful, Norah. Loved the ending!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah. 🙂

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  10. Jim Borden Avatar

    I love how it turned around – the shamer became the shamed, and rightfully so!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jim. I thought so too.

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  11. Prior... Avatar

    Fun way of using shame and like in so many different ways – very cool

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Yvette. I hadn’t realised I’d overused ‘like’ as well. Thank you for your observation.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        Not overused at all – was like a fun word thread

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          1. Prior... Avatar

            Hope your month is winding down well – I am ready for September

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            1. Norah Avatar

              Me too! I’m looking forward to spring!

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              1. Prior... Avatar

                So glad you have spring’s newness on the way

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                1. Norah Avatar

                  Have a great week, Yvette!

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  12. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I don’t even see those sorts of attitudes around. Maybe I don’t notice. It would be… shameful…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It would, Jacqui. I’m pleased you don’t see it. Perhaps I wasn’t as true to life as I’d hoped – or feared.

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