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Baby Ducks Ate My Lunch #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story to explain “baby ducks ate my lunch.” How did that happen? Who is the protagonist? Where did the baby ducks come from? Go where the prompt leads!

My first thought was of the oft-quoted excuse for failing to complete homework: the dog ate my homework, but I decided to go with a more plausible situation with excited children feeding ducks at the park. I hope you enjoy it.

Baby Ducks Ate My Lunch

A wail fractured the picture-perfect ‘Freedom Day’, the first outing since lockdown began aeons ago.

Father’s mind wandered like the lonely cloud contrasted against the vivid sky, contemplating nothing—no lessons, no video calls, no demands for something to eat or do. Mother absentmindedly stroked his hair as she inhaled the freshness of the sunshine and the scent of nearby gardenias. The children entertained themselves—what luxury—feeding ducks with days-old bread.

The wail amplified, like an approaching train, finally demanding Father’s and Mother’s attention. “What’s wrong?”

“Baby ducks ate my lunch,” wailed the younger. The older one shrugged.

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Please share your thoughts.

Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Disappearance, including mine,can be read at the Carrot Ranch here.

Comments

31 responses to “Baby Ducks Ate My Lunch #99WordStories”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  2. Liz H Avatar

    And that’s just the way with baby ducks, isn’t it?
    An end to an idyllic afternoon…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Indeed, baby ducks, or just just babies …

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  3. dgkaye Avatar

    A sweet story Norah, and clever. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Debby. 💖

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  4. Gloria Avatar

    Mmm…suspicious! 🤨😄

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  5. Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry Avatar

    What a sweet story, Norah. I totally got caught up in the moment with the parents. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen.

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  6. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    You capture that brief moment of peace beautifully, Norah. I hope your characters know not to give real ducks bread 😉

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Anne. I’m pleased I captured the moment. I did hesitate about feeding the ducks bread. I do disagree with it – we know better now – but many still do so I wanted to paint a realistic picture. Perhaps I should have chosen something else less destructive to birdlife.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Robin.

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  7. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
    Bette A. Stevens

    Well done, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Bette. 🙂

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      1. Bette A. Stevens Avatar
        Bette A. Stevens

        ❤ xo

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  8. Jules Avatar

    This reminds me of a time just before our lock down (which has relaxed much these days) – when we went for a walk at a local park around their pond path and met our son, DIL and grands! It was delightful to see the water fowl, but that pond had signs to not feed the wildlife. Still I’m sure some brave ducks do get to close to ground level picnic lunches 😀

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I agree with those signs to not feed the ducks, Jules, but many still do so I wanted to paint an accurate picture.
      How wonderful to meet your family unexpectedly at the local park!

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  9. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    It still is a great picnic, despite some overzealous feeding (and judiciously chosen food) of the ducks. Well painted, this family portrait.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, D. I’m not actually in favour of feeding ducks stale bread but many families still do it so I hoped the picture was accurate. Thank you.

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  10. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    What a cute story, Norah. I can just imagine this.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. 🙂

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  11. Chel Owens Avatar

    🙂 I can picture this all. A lovely story.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Chelsea.

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  12. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Just in time for Easter. Darling story, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I didn’t think about that, but true, Jacqui. 🙂

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