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The Littlest Goat #flashfiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes the littlest Christmas goat. Who does the goat belong to? What is happening? Go where the prompt leads!

When I thought of goats, children and stories, I thought of one of my least favourite children’s stories: The Wolf and the Seven Little Kids. I’ve written about it before, explained why I disliked it, and even wrote another flash fiction in response to one of Charli’s prompts about it.

There was nothing else for it. I had to attack it again in another way, hoping to put it in a more positive light. I hope you like it.

The Littlest Goat

“You’re too little.”

The all-too-familiar chorus stung but he determined to show them size didn’t matter; not the way they thought.

Before long, opportunity came knocking.

The others were too stupid to check before opening the door, too slow to escape the intruder and too big to hide. The littlest one watched from the grandfather clock as the wolf devoured them one by one.

When Mother returned from Christmas shopping, the littlest goat told all. Together, they found the greedy wolf and rescued his brothers.

The littlest goat showed that being clever, quick and brave beat size any day.

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32 responses to “The Littlest Goat #flashfiction”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    Hooray for the little goat!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jennie. 😊

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  2. Msdedeng Avatar
    Msdedeng

    What a lovely story, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Angela.

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      1. Msdedeng Avatar
        Msdedeng

        My pleasure, Norah!

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  3. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is a super retelling of this story, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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  4. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Isn’t that a great lesson. Darling story, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Jacqui.

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  5. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    Very sweet, Norah. Nice spin on a classic tale. Hope you’re having a lovely holiday season! 🎄

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah. I hope you are enjoying the holiday season too. Best wishes to you and your family. 💖

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  6. calmkate Avatar

    very positive twist … but you are kidding 😉

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Indeed. 😂

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  7. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    .I imagine lots of kids (!) can identify with that goat.

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    1. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

      Haha! Nice one, Anne.

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    2. Norah Avatar

      I think so too.

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  8. Prior... Avatar

    How did they get rescued if the wolf devoured them ?
    Or were some not devoured?
    Anyhow – cute theme to remind that size doesn’t matter when it comes to being clever and paying attention

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s a good question, Yvette, and makes me realise I should have explained in this post. I didn’t as I had done so in the previous on that I linked to.
      In the original fairy tale, the wolf devoured all the kids whole (except for the littlest one). When mum came home, she cut him open and all the kids popped out alive and well. They filled his stomach with rocks, sewed him up and threw him in the river. Ghastly story on many levels, in my opinion.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        wow – that is ghastly and rough – whoa
        and thanks for the details to give me the full picture
        ((and hope you have a great rest of the week))

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thanks, Yvette. I’m slow getting around at the moment. All the best to you for the holiday season!

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          1. Prior... Avatar

            thanks – and you too – 🙂

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  9. beth Avatar

    yay for the tiny goat!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Beth.

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  10. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Some tough lessons for those bigger goat kids. But that’s the way of tales like these. A classic!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I don’t envy their lesson format though. 😂

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  11. Jim Borden Avatar

    I guess sometimes being small helps. fun story, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I guess. Thanks, Jim.

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