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Candy Kitchen #flashfiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that features a candy kitchen. You can interpret the phrase creatively or stick to the traditional. Is it sweet? Ironic? Any genre will do. Go where the prompt leads!

My thoughts about a candy kitchen went straight to Roald Dahl’s book Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. What an incredible candy kitchen that was. And then there was the song The Candy Man performed by Sammy Davis Jr.

Who wouldn’t want to be a kid in a candy store, or better yet, a kid in a candy kitchen?

I thought of the busy kitchen of my childhood, with my mother making sweets for Christmas treats. There were rum balls and peanut brittle, chocolate bark and caramel fudge, coconut ice and marshmallow, and who knows what other sweet delights. I don’t remember them all. But I do remember one more recent Christmas when the choice of sweets became a philosophical rather than taste decision.

This is a fictionalised version of the incident. I hope you enjoy it.

Marshmallow Waves

The cooks bustled about my kitchen making sweets to gift.

“I love homemade gifts,” she said.

“Especially when we get to share,” he said, sampling largish crumbs of fudge and coconut ice.

“Marshmallow is amazing,” she said. It mixes up so light and fluffy,”

“What’s in it?”

“Sugar, water and gelatine.”

“What’s gelatine?” he asked.

I dared not tell the vegetarians, but he searched for information on his phone.

“We can’t eat that,” he spluttered. “Gelatine’s made from animal bones!”

The marshmallow mix, so light and fluffy, was binned. Not even a taste for me, although I’m not vegetarian.

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60 responses to “Candy Kitchen #flashfiction”

  1. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    Fun story and you made me think of my grandma’s kitchen. Way back then there were no debates about plant-based diets and we just ate what she made!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It was like that in my house too – eat what you’re given and be grateful for it.

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  2. Jules Avatar

    I don’t remember making candy or cookies that much. But we alwasy dreaded the ‘Fruitcake’.
    We would alwasy take bets on how many years old it was, and who had it last… 😉

    (What a waste of good marshmellows!)

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That’s a funny fruitcake story. Some would say it’s a ‘fruitcake’ fruitcake story. (I’m not sure if you use the term fruitcake over there to mean someone a little loopy.)
      It would be a waste of marshmallows. 😂

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      1. Jules Avatar

        For a time yes, Fruitcake, even ‘fruitloop’ – like the cerial… but I think there are too many other negative names that have replaced those ‘fruit’ terms. 😉

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Yeah, you’re right, Jules. I didn’t think before writing. It was negative and not appropriate. Sorry.

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          1. Jules Avatar

            Words change meaning overtime. I know I don’t always keep up. Not to worry. (((Hugs)))

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            1. Norah Avatar

              I was taught once that English is a living language – it contines to change and grow – and that’s certainly true.

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              1. Jules Avatar

                I’ve read that about a few languages. 😀

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  3. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    I love marshmallows and have treated myself to salted-caramel favoured ones this year. They are divine. Hence I have to be careful and not eat the whole box. If I like something, I’m not bothered about what’s in it. If I dislike the taste of something, then it seems I am.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Salted caramel marshmallows! They do sound divine. I haven’t seen them here, but then I guess I haven’t really looked either. I must!

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  4. Patricia Tilton Avatar

    Oh, to remember the days when we didn’t care and just ate food. Not a marshmallow fan, so probably wouldn’t eat it either. But there is gelatin in many things. We have become so health conscious that we have let go of things we enjoyed eating. Loved the first Willy Wonka film. Great to see the performance by Sammy Davis Jr. — didn’t realize it was a top hit! A walk down memory lane!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you enjoyed the post Patricia. I didn’t know that The Candy Man was from the film Willy Wonka. I had thought it was older than that, so it was a good reminiscence for me too.

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  6. Rebecca Glaessner Author Avatar

    Oh no! Not the marshmellows! Our 8 year old would go bonkers at the thought of that. Glad that’s not our kitchen, she’d be kicking out the cooks in a heartbeat. Marshmellows aren’t a personal favourite but I remember having to stay away from soft serve ice cream because of the gelatine while pregnant, that wasn’t a fun time…

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I wouldn’t have thought about gelatine in soft serve ice cream. I thought if it was a problem for pregnancy it would be in the ‘soft’ like the soft cheeses etc. Thanks for letting me know. We learn a little more each day.

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      1. Rebecca Glaessner Author Avatar

        Not sure about all kinds, but Macca’s soft serve/sundaes etc have it. And no worries! I had no idea until I was actually pregnant. Imagine the surprise! Especially when McFlurries with Oreo on top have always been a favourite.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Oh dear, that’s so sad. Good thing pregancy doesn’t last forever. (Although sometimes it seems like it does. 😅)

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  7. Darlene Avatar

    A good take on the prompt. Yup, no gelatine for us. I also don’t like marshmallows so I’m OK.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      You are okay, Darlene. There are many other treats without gelatine. I haven’t found a suitable replacement for making my favourite mango cream pie though. Agar agar doesn’t set with some fruits, including mango. 😢

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  8. Jim Borden Avatar

    great song and an enjoyable story- us vegetarians are always spoiling the fun 🙂

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I don’t know about spoiling the fun – we had a good laugh, that’s for sure. 🙂

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  9. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Well, there goes that treat. And one wouldn’t think to warn the vegetarians about it, but there you go. Fun flash!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      No, it didn’t cross my mind, D. They were adults in charge of their own lives. I didn’t even think about it, until he asked the question and was looking it up before I could say. I remember holding my breath as he looked it up, knowing what he was going to find out and what the reaction would be. It was all quite funny really. It was probably as devastating as finding out the Easter Bunny’s not real. (Shhh. You didn’t hear that from me.)

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  10. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Great little BOTS story, Norah. The narrator / you must’ve been so mad.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It’s not all true, Anne. I just remember being amazed that they didn’t know what gelatine was. I can’t remember what happened to the marshmallow. I remember my anxiety when he said he was going to look it up and I knew what he was going to find out. I hadn’t given it a thought until then.

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  11. calmkate Avatar

    oh no … and I thought I was a veggo for years! But I’ve eaten marshmallows, you’ve broken my heart!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Oh I’m so sorry, Kate. You didn’t know either? I thought everyone knew. Everyone used to talk about it trying to gross each other out in my teenage years. I couldn’t believe they didn’t know.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        maybe I did hear and just didn’t want to believe it … oh my!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I think there are some things we’d rather not know!

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          1. calmkate Avatar

            how can something so delicious be made by such rubbish … those ppl should be making medicines!

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            1. Norah Avatar

              😅🤣😂

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            2. Norah Avatar

              What I want to know is how it was discovered.

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              1. calmkate Avatar

                exactly and if you knew what it was how on earth could you even contemplate putting it into your mouth … gruesome, the ultimate halloween nightmare ..

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                1. Norah Avatar

                  That’s so funny, Kate. I think it’s true of many things. But we survive. 🙂

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  12. Prior... Avatar

    The Samir Davis video was a flashback
    cute story
    And I think a lot of marshmallow today is made with corn syrup – and I
    guess the gelatin (gelatine) had healthy benefits – that is for those who could ethically eat it

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I think you’re right about the corn syrup instead of the sugar, but the gelatine is still in it. Now that I think about it, she was probably using corn syrup. I might still have a jar in the cupboard. 😅
      And health benefits – I think I might remember being told as a child that it was good for hair and nails. Whether that’s true or not, I don’t know.
      You’re right about the eating too – there’s a lot more we need to consider about what we put into our bodies than just whether it tastes good.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        Hi – I think I heard about gelatine being good for hair and nails too
        And maybe today’s collagen powders are the modem version

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Yes, you may be right. I see collagen powder is made from the same meat products as gelatine.

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  13. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Whew! If I were a kid, I know whose kitchen I’d want to be hanging out in. Your take on the prompt made me smile, too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased it made you smile, Pete. It was quite funny at the time. I don’t really remember the whole event (I did say it was fictionalised). Really all I remember is their reaction when he decided to find out what gelatine was made from and my disbelief that they didn’t already know. 😅

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  14. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    I love the original Willy Wonka film and all the songs, Norah. The newer version – not so much! To scary. Gelatin is made from animal bones and cheese used to be made using calf rennet. I can’t help thinking that it is only middle class people who can afford to be so fussy about food. The poor eat what they can get.

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    1. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

      I agree, Robbie. The damage has already been done so why thow it away?

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      1. Norah Avatar

        I’m not actually sure what happened to the marshmallow, but I know they wouldn’t have eaten it. 🙂

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    2. Norah Avatar

      I agree with you about the Willy Wonka films, Robbie. Though they suffer criticism for many other reasons now. We live in a changing world. Changing for the better, I hope. Your reaction to the gelatine issue is interesting, Robbie, and so true. Though I’m not sure the poor would be making marshmallows. 🙂

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      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        No, but they would eat them if they could. I used to make rainbow cupcakes on Mandela day and drive around Joburg giving them to beggars. No for the past two years, of course.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          You are such a kind and thoughtful person, Robbie. What a wonderful role model.

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          1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

            HI Norah, I try to help people. I don’t like knowing people are going without food. Yesterday, I dismantled my gingerbread project and packaged it up for the beggars. It was pouring with rain but there they were trying to scrape a few coins together to buy food. They were very happy to have the gingerbread. It really pains me, seeing beggars on the street.

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            1. Norah Avatar

              There in so much that needs to be improved in the world, Robbie. We do what we can. You are doing your bit. Thank you for your contribution.

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  15. Chel Owens Avatar

    Well, shoot. Next time sneak some first!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I can’t actually remember what happened to the marshmallow, just their reaction to finding out what gelatine was made from. I thought that anyone in their thirties and university educated would know. I must have missed that chapter when educating my daughter. 😅

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  16. Charli Mills Avatar

    Ha! That song came on the radio when I drove up to the Cany Kitchen and I was singing and laughing. And here you posted it! I like how treats have traditional roots but modern philosophy too.

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    1. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

      You couldn’t put that in a novel, could you? Some real life coincidences are too neat.

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      1. Norah Avatar

        No, I couldn’t, Anne. But you’re welcome to use it if the need arises. 😅 I was just stunned they didn’t already know. Thirty-something and university educated. I must have missed that bit when Bec was growing up.

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    2. Norah Avatar

      I’m pleased you thought of the Candy Man too. I think I could do with a visit from the Candy Man at the moment. 😉💖

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