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Carrot Ranch flash fiction challenge - exhaustion

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes exhaustion. Who is exhausted and why? Can you make art of exhaustion? Go where the prompt leads!

Feeling a little overwhelmed with extra demands on my time over the past few of months, coupled with a recent battle with the flu, I didn’t know if I could muster enough energy to respond this time. But when this blog’s tagline includes the words ‘Create the possibilities’, I thought I should give it a go. I hope you like my response.

Exhausted possibilities

Jolted awake when the bus reached the terminal, they grabbed their belongings and stumbled out. The driver shrugged when asked about accommodation.

‘NO VACANCY’ signs flashed along narrow streets. ‘NOT WELCOME’ lists accompanied the few with vacancies.

Trudging back to the terminal, hoping for seclusion, a ‘VACANCY’ appeared where none before. An old man bade them enter, waved away their money and installed them comfortably.

“Thank you. Thank you,” they bowed, and collapsed into sleep.

In the morning, they were alone. A note lay on the table:

When you think you have exhausted all possibilities, there is always more.”

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your comments. Please share your thoughts.

 

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46 responses to “Create the possibilities”

  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is a lovely flash, Norah. I hope you are recovered now.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Robbie. Yes, all better now – at last!

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  2. Susan Scott Avatar

    Very inspiring Norah thank you! Yes, magic is often in the air, and I hope it comes your way soon and helps with that coughing ..

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Susan. I’m all better now. 🙂

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  3. Hugh's Views and News Avatar

    That last line is very true, Norah. I hope you’re feeling a lot better.
    Take care.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Hugh. Yes, I’m feeling much better today. Thank you. 🙂

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  4. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Norah. A sprinkle of magic and hope was perfect.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  5. Chelsea Owens Avatar

    I like it, Norah! What a sweet tale.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Chelsea. 🙂

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  6. dgkaye Avatar

    Exhaustion seemed the perfect word for you of late Norah. But you’ve done it proud! I do hope you’re over that nasty flu. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Debby. I think I’m nearly there – still coughing a bit but it’s decreasing every day. Back to my normal any day now. 🙂

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      1. dgkaye Avatar

        Thank goodness! That flu has knocked the wind out of many a person’s sails this season. 😉

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you, Debby. I think I’m nearly right again! 🙂

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          1. dgkaye Avatar

            Amen! 🙂

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  7. roughwighting Avatar

    What a positive story – much needed in this time that seems full of negativity. In 99 words – you showed us the best in humankind. Thank you.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you for always finding the best in others, Pamela. I appreciate your generosity.

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  8. Jules Avatar

    When something like that happens… I think of living angels.
    Kindness is a gift that can keep on giving. And that kindness remembered will be offered to someone else – paid forward.

    Our weather when it changes always makes my sinuses act up. A full blown cold can get in the way. So can life. Stay healthy and keep spreading the magic! Your story made me smile this morning and that is spreading the magic!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I agree, Jules. Kindness is a gift that keeps on giving. It’s especially powerful when we pay it forward. I’m so pleased you enjoyed the story and that it made you smile. That is magic.
      Thank you for your kindness.

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  9. Exhaustion « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

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  10. Charli Mills Avatar

    Your flash brought a sting of tears to my eyes, Norah! I hope you are feeling better. This flu around the world seems to be a draining one. Take care of yourself! ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Charli. No need for tears though. I must have unintentionally exaggerated my situation. I wasn’t looking for sympathy. There’s just been a lot going on and it’s been hard to find a moment. Being sick doesn’t help but I think I’m okay now. I just wish I’d stop coughing. 🙂

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      1. roughwighting Avatar

        Feel better! The flu is not fun. Coughing is exhausting. Rest. Drink lots of fluids. Sending healing vibes. xo

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you, Pam. Yes, I’ve been resting and drinking – and receiving your healing vibes. They all help. 🙂

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          1. roughwighting Avatar

            I think the “resting” part is the most challenging one. But it DOES help. xo

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            1. Norah Avatar

              It does. I’m feeling much better today. Thank you. 🙂

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  11. Darlene Avatar

    A perfect lesson in a few words. Wonderful!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Darlene. 🙂

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  12. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Perfect timing. I am writing a scene in my story where my character is injured, thirsty, and exhausted but must continue. This inspires me.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      You’ve made my day, Jacqui. Thank you. I hope your scene works out. 🙂

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  13. calmkate Avatar

    squeezing out that last drop, and what a worthy one! Now rest a while …

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Kate. I finished one of my jobs today but still have another to go. I feel some of the weight has lifted but can’t rest yet – soon! 🙂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        very soon I hope, you deserve it!

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        1. Norah Avatar

          You’re very kind, Kate. Thank you. ❤

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  14. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    Sorry you’ve been exhausted and hope you find some respite like the characters in your flash.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Anne. I finished another of the jobs today. Yay! Still another (much smaller one) to go. I’m still cough, cough, coughing but feeling much better. I wasn’t really exhausted, just overwhelmed with too much going on. Thanks for your wishes.

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  15. Prior... Avatar

    Well
    Done – a bit of hope you delivered 😉

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  16. Sarah Brentyn Avatar

    This is beautiful, Norah. Love that last line. ❤️

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah. I really appreciate your kind words. It’s lovely to have you visit again. ❤

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  17. thecontentedcrafter Avatar

    There’s often a little bit of magic to be found just when it seems all hope is lost – beautifully found here Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Pauline. I thought I should return to optimism rather than lurk in pessimism. 🙂

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  18. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    A magical response, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, D. I wanted to make it a bit more magical but used up all my words too soon.

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