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I’d rather be … #99WordStories

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writes to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story using the phrase, ā€œI’d rather beā€¦ā€ You fill in what comes next. What would a character(s) rather be doing and why? How can you use the phrase as a literary device? Go where the prompt leads!

This is my response. I hope you like it.

I’d rather be …

ā€˜I’d rather be dead!’

She ran into the street in a downpour of tears, yanking at the sweater as if it crawled with monsters.

ā€˜Don’t worry. She’ll be back,’ said Dad.

ā€˜I only suggested —’

ā€˜I know. But teenagers like to choose what they wear.’

ā€˜She always did. Even a toddler — so dramatic.’

ā€˜Like someone I know. Would you have worn your mother’s old sweater at her age?’

ā€˜I did and was grateful for it.’

ā€˜You were poor. We can afford to buy her a sweater.’

ā€˜There’s nothing wrong with hand-me-downs.’

ā€˜But The Bay City Rollers? Really?’

ā€˜Well —’

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Note: The collection of stories made in response to the previous prompt Zippers can be read at the Carrot Ranch here.

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45 responses to “I’d rather be … #99WordStories”

  1. Gloria Avatar

    I’m with the teenager on this one Norah! Hahahaha!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I am too, Gloria. šŸ˜…

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  2. veenafuna Avatar

    Is the challenge still on?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      There’s a new challenge every week.

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  4. Jules Avatar

    I had hand-me-downs until I grew taller than my sister…
    Certain ‘savings’ aspects are generational. But… šŸ˜‰

    FYI I know a Mom who spent money on a sports letter jacket for her child – that once the child moved didn’t want anymore. Now the Mom wears it!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Children can be fickle. I’m pleased mum got the benefits. šŸ™‚

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  5. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Ha! The Bay City Rollers… that is a lot for a teen to bear. In the 70s there were indoor roller skating rinks where that band was played a lot. Did you have those roller rinks?

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    1. Norah Avatar

      There was a rink reasonably close to me (20 mins by bus maybe) when I was a teenager. That was long before the Bay City Rollers came onto the scene. I don’t know if it still existed then anyway. I never rocked and rolled but I sometimes watched after I’ve collected my week’s books from the library. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š

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      1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

        You are better off for the books.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Definitely!

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  6. TanGental Avatar

    That’s not prudence, that’s child abuse! The Rollers… one has to ask about the sanity of the adult who kept a Rollers pullover.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      šŸ˜…šŸ˜…šŸ˜… I’m inclined to agree. I think that was the whole point. Who would want to wear one? Any time?

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      1. TanGental Avatar

        I think hypothermia has its pluses when that is the option…

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I think so too! šŸ˜…šŸ˜…šŸ˜…

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  7. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Norah, my parents didn’t have a lot of money when I was a girl, but my mother always tried to buy us girls new clothes. I think as the last female child in her family, she was very against hand-me-downs.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I think I agree with your mum, Robbie. I always tried to have new things for my children.

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  8. Jim Borden Avatar

    at some point, that Bay City Rollers sweater will come back into fashion as “vintage”

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    1. Norah Avatar

      That was my thinking. šŸ™‚

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  9. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah!

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  10. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Fabulous, Norah, you had me oscillating between siding with the mother and siding with the teenager until that killer penultimate line.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      And who did you side with then, Anne? šŸ˜…

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      1. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

        Definitely the daughter. Those clothes were terrible even the first time around.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Oh, I know! šŸ™‚

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  11. Darlene Avatar

    Perfect! I love it.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Darlene.

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  12. Prior... Avatar

    Good humor ending – but thought there was a violent flash fiction on our hands when I first read the ran in the street bit and monsters crawling! Well
    Done with that “pow”!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I hope you weren’t disappointed, Yvette. I try to keep my stories ‘safe’ on my blog. My first short stories weren’t always so.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        No disappointment at all! The opposite A was delight! I don’t like horror and dark and gloomy – just my preference – anyhow – I think my eyes opened wide when I read the opening screaming šŸ‘€ and was like – huh???
        But then sat back and enjoyed the direction you took – quite clever

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you, Yvette. I don’t like horror and dark and gloomy either. There’s too much in life without having to write or read it.

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  13. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Oh, you are going back in time with the Bay City Rollers. Fashion produces all sorts of emotions.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It sure does. They were a big hit in their time but I was never a fan.

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      1. petespringerauthor Avatar
        petespringerauthor

        I couldn’t tell you one song they played, but their name does stick with me.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          It obviously stuck with me too, though I was past the teeny-bopper stage when they arrived on it.

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  14. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Complicated story. Well done.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui. Not too complicated, I hope.

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      1. Jacqui Murray Avatar

        I had so many ideas where it could go from the ending. That’s a wonderful gift to readers.

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        1. Norah Avatar

          Thank you, Jacqui. That’s quite a compliment.

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  15. Book Club Mom Avatar

    Another good one, Norah. And oh, the Bay City Rollers – haven’t thought of them in a long time!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I haven’t either. I’m not sure why I did for this but they just popped into my head. I was never a fan. They were after my time.

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      1. Book Club Mom Avatar

        I kind of remember them when I was about 12 or so…

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        1. Norah Avatar

          (She clears her throat) I was quite a bit older than tha. šŸ˜…

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