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Flight Cancelled #flashfiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write about a canceled flight. Where was the flight headed? Who does it impact and why? How does a protagonist handle the situation? Go where the prompt leads!

Due to our Covid-19 lockdowns and border restrictions, it’s a couple of years now since I took a flight anywhere. Even flights of the imagination have been few and far between as a variety of factors have colluded to suppress my creativity as well. However, I couldn’t resist a prompt about flight.

I’ve always thought how wonderful it would be to be a bird and fly above the earth and see it in all its beauty. Looking down on the patchwork quilt from a plane’s window gives me joy and a sense of wonder. How much greater it would be to fly like a bird. I guess other forms of flight would give an experience closer to that of a bird, but I haven’t tried any of those yet (and am unlikely to).

Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Richard Bach is one of my favourite books. I have read it numerous times and love the description of flight and the exhilaration it brings to Jonathan.

I know I’m not the only one to be fascinated by flight. Many children wish they could fly like birds and their superheroes. That’s where I’ve gone with my response to Charli’s prompt this time. I hope you enjoy it.

Flight Cancelled

Heron balanced on one leg on the bare tree branch above the water. He spread his wings and stretched his neck to face the breeze. He revelled in the freedom of flight even before his feet lifted from their base — the exultation of gliding through the thermals. Superhero Heron — like his namesake — was ready for take-off.

‘Heron! Heron! Get down. This instant.’

‘I am. I’m flying down.’

‘No. You are using the same ladder you used to get up.’

‘You called me Heron, so I can fly.’

‘You will not fly today. This flight is cancelled. You are grounded.’

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Oh, and before you go, you might like to watch a fun video of a picture book by Mo Willems called Today I Will Fly. I love it. It’s so clever, especially the ending. Unfortunately, I can’t share it here but you can follow the link to watch.

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27 responses to “Flight Cancelled #flashfiction”

  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    I have read stories about little boys who have jumped out of windows of high rise buildings thinking they can fly. A little scary. I jumped from the top of the wash line when I was about 7 and sprained my arm.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      You were a climber too, obviously. I hope the sprain healed quickly. I’m pleased it wasn’t broken.

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  2. Jennie Avatar

    Well done, Norah. I’ve always wanted to be a bird, too.

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  3. Darlene Avatar

    My son and his friend played superhero and thought they could fly. They jumped off our fence and his friend broke his arm. That flight should have been cancelled.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Oh dear, Darlene. I guess because that flight wasn’t cancelled, many others were.

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  4. Canceled Flight « Carrot Ranch Literary Community Avatar

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  5. Charli Mills Avatar

    Norah, I think it’s time to re-read Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Your story captures that determination although mom, the safety manager, had to call it off.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I think you’re right about Jonathan, Charli. Thank you for the suggestion. 😊 And for your kind words about my story.

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  6. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    It scared me, Norah. I’m glad the flight is canceled. I used to have a copy of Jonathan Livingston Seagull, but left it in Hong Kong.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I’m sure you carry a lot of it in your heart, Miriam. I know I do.

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  7. Jules Avatar

    Sometimes in dreams, I think I fly… but only the interpretations of what I’ve seen.
    I almost had a ‘flight’ one of those sort of human kites – pulled by a speed boat. But I didn’t do it.
    I wonder it is similar to those human flight suits with wings… Something for the young? 😉

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Maybe the young or the adventurous, but not for me either, Jules, though I think it looks fun.

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      1. Jules Avatar

        Kind of like some sports… fun to watch, but unless you are prepared… best to relax and just enjoy those who ‘might’ know what they are doing 😉

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I agree. 🙂

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  8. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    I love how you mentioned ‘grounded’ while the main character was up a tree. Your piece of flash finished off very nicely, Norah.

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  9. Anne Goodwin is bringing Matilda Windsor home Avatar

    Nice one, Norah. If I could fly, I’d be a heron too. Don’t forget your creativity during the pandemic. All those new resources and didn’t you win a certain competition too?
    PS. Instance or instant? (Edit this out if you wish.)

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I appreciate your encouragement. It hasn’t felt creative. It’s felt more like hard work. Did I win a competition? Maybe you’re right. That seems so long ago now.
      You’re right about instant too. Fixed now. Thank you. That one shouldn’t have slipped by. Of course, I could blame the parent’s poor grammar rather than my own. 😅

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  10. calmkate Avatar

    just like a grumpy parent to interrupt a kids dream!

    I still call all gulls Livingstone … what a book.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Yeah, Livingston is an amazing book. 🙂

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        it stays with us forever and that is profound!

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  11. petespringerauthor Avatar
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    Nice one, Norah. I still occasionally have flying dreams. They’re kind of weird. I don’t know if I’m a bird or what, but I feel myself moving in space like I’m flying. I sure hope you get to travel soon. One of my brothers and his wife were supposed to go to Australia two years ago, and they’re still grounded too.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Pete. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
      Fingers crossed real flying is back on the agenda soon. We’ve been grounded too long.

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  12. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Of course you got a kid and imagination in there. Nice one Buddy!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, D. I’m pleased it worked.

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  13. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Clever, that. I love Jonathan Livingston Seagull, too. What a beautiful book.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      It is a clever book. It says so much to me.

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