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Kid and Pal Down Under #flashfiction

Kid and Pal Down Under Flash Fiction

Dusty Trails Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction

This week at the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills challenged writers to In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that happens on the dusty trail. It can take place anywhere. Who is your character, where are they going, and why? Bonus points if they meet up with Kid and Pal from D. Avery’s Ranch Yarns and Saddle Up Saloon (they hit the trail so TUFF could take over the saloon). Go where the prompt leads!

I thought Kid and Pal might like to spend a little of their downtime in the Australian Outback. It is down-time after all.

On the Trail Down Under

The hooves thundered along the trail kicking up a storm of dust. Mary watched the cloud clear the trees and turn towards her across the home paddock.

How often had the boys been told to not push their horses so hard?

“Might as well talk to a dead cow,” her dad always said.

Before they’d reined in their mounts, Mary was outside, ready to give them a serve.

“Mum! Mum! It’s Kid and Pal. They’re here,” they shouted.

Mary sighed. Hadn’t they outgrown imaginary friends?

Her jaw dropped when, out of the dust, two figures materialised. “G’day,” they said.

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34 responses to “Kid and Pal Down Under #flashfiction”

  1. Jennie Avatar

    This was good, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Jennie. 🙂

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You’re welcome, Norah.

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  2. Liz H Avatar

    Wow! An extended vacation for Kid and Pal. Lucky them, to travel so far. ❤

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Not many can do it these days. 🙂

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  3. Hugh W. Roberts Avatar

    I, too, also love the line ‘might as well talk to a dead cow.’ A nice piece of ‘outback’ flash fiction, Norah.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Hugh. I’m pleased my dead cow worked. 🙂

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  4. Charli Mills Avatar

    Oh, the Outback will never be the same! Thanks for bringing Kid and Pal down under.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      I think Kid and Pal will fit right in. 🙂

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  5. petespringerauthor Avatar
    petespringerauthor

    Great job, Norah! I love the line, “Might as well talk to a dead cow.”😊

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Pete. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

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  6. calmkate Avatar

    lol great one Norah, love it .. five gold stars!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Woohoo! Thanks, Kate.

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        I thought you might appreciate that 😉

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        1. Norah Avatar

          I surely did. 🙂

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  7. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    What a surprise, Mary was not imagining. Great job, Norah!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Miriam. 🙂

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  8. Jim Borden Avatar

    they’re alive!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Didn’t you know that?

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  9. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Ha! They showed Mary! Great story, Norah. Carrot Ranch always has some fun challenges. Well done.

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Diana. The challenges can sometimes be fun and sometimes … well, challenging. 🙂

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  10. Darlene Avatar

    A good one. Love it!!

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thank you, Darlene.

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  11. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

    Wow, this is fabulous, Norah.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Anne. I’m delighted you enjoyed it.

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  12. TanGental Avatar

    I love the idea of them coming alive. Rather terrifying in fact

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    1. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist) Avatar

      If they ever make it across the Atlantic, I’m hiding behind you.

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      1. Norah Avatar

        Good idea!

        Liked by 1 person

      2. TanGental Avatar

        Actually that’s a cunning plan. Their home brewed cider sounds terrifying

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    1. Norah Avatar

      Thanks, Robin.

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